How to learn English? (30/30 Challenge)

[_Vivien_]

Hello Amy,

Thank you for correcting my reports. It helps a lot.

Well, there is my next one:

When Rachel arrives at the agency she has to pass several security checks for example a DNA-test to get access. In her office, her Boss William Pickering is already waiting for her. He explains that the president is looking for an important private meeting with her and send a helicopter. Pickering also gives her a few tips for the meeting. When Rachel is on board and the helicopter takes off, she notices that the pilot doesn't drive (??) in the correct direction of the White House. She asks why, but gets no answer. Some minutes later, the land on an island. It's Wallapse Island. Very nervous Rachel enters the Airforce One where the president of the United States of America is waiting. Rachel is very impressed of the president who wears casual and the plane which is enormous and luxury.

The scene changes.

Senator Sexton and his young black personal assistant Gabrielle Ash sit in the senators car. The senator remembers the time when Gabrielle started working for him. Althoug she's only 24, she was very succesful on his election campaign. Gabrielle was very impressed by the personality of the senator. One night Sexton got her trust and they slept together. But for Gabrielle it's all business. She advised Sexton to speak about the NASA's costs in interviews and conferences. And the public reacted on it. Sextons election campaign got his first results. After that the senator made her his first campaign manager. Today she has news from the White House. Something is going on with the president. There is very little contact with the White House since there was an incoming call from NASA.

[Yankee]

Hi Vivien

Here are my suggestions for your latest report.

[Katrin]

Hello everyone,

here are the continuation of my hearbook:

A security man must observe many rooms about cameras. The picture by one camera isn?t the correct picture. It?s the camera eighty six. He informed his boss. They look at the room where the camera must be, but the camera isn?t in the romm. Many securitys men must search for the camera.

Vetra isn?t the right father from Victoria. He was a young priest and she and eight years old orphan. She was sitting allone on the meadow and he has speak to her. So they became acquainted with themselves. They become very good friends, he was like a father for her. But one day Vetra say to Victoria he must to the Switzerland - Geneva for physics. Victoria was very sadly but wondering, too. He was a priest not a physics. What make a priest with physic? Because she was so sadly Vetra ask her whether she wants come with him. And Victoria said yes.

Victoria, Langdon and Kohler go at the labor from Vertra. Victoria look around the room but she cann?t see that what is stolen or damaged. Then she tells from the last experiment - the big bang. They have found a way to place behind the big bang. Meet a antimatter a subject one can see a little light. Victoria wants to show this.

... to be continued.

Regards Katrin

[_Vivien_]

Hello,

The story keeps going on:

After a smalltalk with Rachel on Airforce One, president Herney (??) tells her news about NASA. EOS (earth observation system) made a discovery. This system contains a few satellites which observe the earth for enviromental development. Rachel first thinks about aliens. But the president mentioned good news. In spite of bringing the news to public and fighting against Sexton's campaign, president Herney send some private scientists to prove the discovery. In the evening there will be a press conference about it. The president wants Rachel to support him. She should make her own impressions of the discovery and speak to the assistant of NASA. Herney leads her to a hangar. He asks Rachel for her her mobile phone. When she gives it to him, Herney puts it in his pocket and leaves her alone. It's dark there and Rachel is frightened. Then a pilot orderes her to board a jet and put on an airmask (?) because they will fly very high. After a short talk they take of to fly 3000 kilometers in northern direction.

To be continued...

[Yankee]

Hi Katrin

Here are my suggestions for your last report.

[Yankee]

Hi Vivien

Here are my suggestions for your report:

[Lissy]

Hello

this is my new hearbook-report:

At the last I had report about David Becker and his search for the punk girl.

Susan Flechter had find out, that Greg Hale are Nord Dakota and she would commander Strathmore warning for him. In the NSA the lights gone out and Susan stepped though the floors. She found the commander and told him about Greg Hale. The Commander seemed very confuse, but he saw Susan that he want to eraser the mail from Hale and the bypass from the translater. Susan becam the offer to erase the mails. Also she went in Greg Hales office and looked for the computer. While she that done (?) stood in the door and told her, that Stratmore killed Chartrukian. Chartrukian his a technical employee at the NSA. Susan did?nt believed him and tried to put out him of action (?). She hurted his nose and fled on the floor.

In Sevillia Baker looked for the punk girl at the airport and he discovered, that the girl had sold the ring to might the fly. He met a girl on the airport and she had serious injury at her body. Baker asked she if he could help her.

OK. See you soon! Heike

[_Vivien_]

Hello,

The story keeps going on:

Senator Sexton is going to have a close meeting with some men of high influence. They promise to make him win the election. But before, he is checked by an old man in a garage, who orderes him to arrange the meeting at his home. Although Sexton doesn't like this, he agrees.

In the meantime President Herney arrives at the White House. There he orderes his secretary Dolores to arrange a meeting whith his staff. Dolores wonderes why and where the meeting should be. She is afraid that the President could give up the election and quit. Herney explains, that he wants to tell all of his staff (145 people) about important news before the press conference. Dolores should all invite to the Oval Office at four o'clock.

To be continued...

Vivien

[Yankee]

Hi Heike

Here is my latest feedback:

[Yankee]

Hi Vivien

Here are my suggestions:

[Katrin]

Victoria wants to demonstrate the reaction anti-matter and matter. Kohler had fear they can?t controll this. But intersperses itself Victoria. They left the room and look at window. Inside it gives an explosion and one can see a dazzling light. Kohler wants to know wheter all anit-matter what they have. Victoria says no - they have secured a bigger sample in the Hazmat, a labor fifty meters under the ground. Kolher wants to see this and they go in the Hazmet. What Victoria must see at the scanner it lets frighten. She sees blood. And than she must see an eyeball. At the colour of the eyeball she recognizes it?s the eye of her father. She open door to the labor. The sample it?s stolen.
After the demonstration Victoria wants to her father and she wants to call the interpol. But Kohler wants do this. He wants protect her father. When the world experiences what they make it?s not good for Vetra.

The secretary of Kohler got a very importantly call for Kohler. At the telephon Kohler says to the caller they meet at the airport. Than he says to Langdon and Victoria that they are to fly at Roma.

In the airplan Langdon tells Victoria at the Illuminati. They are loading in Roma. As they drive about Roma they see a lot of cameras vans from the TV in the town. They experienced that?s the konklave in Roma. The pope died two weeks before.

Then they are driven in the Peter cathedral where they are received. They are led in the rooms with the screen of security cameras. And Victoria sees the anti-matter at the camera eighty six. To the explosion were only six hours. Then they must go in a office where they must waiting on the next step.

In the sixtinische chapel are waiting the cardinals of the beginning the konklave. Some cardinals become slowly jerky. Are missing the four cardinals they can be selected to the Pope. The Swiss gardisten have not found the four cardinals so far.

[Lissy]

Hello,

this is my new audio book report.

with reference to my last report I get something straight:

At frist Commander Stratmore had bypassed the translater and this path should be deleted.

Susan knocked Greg Hale out.

OK. Back to the story. While Susan was looking for the Commander at Node 3 Greg Hale left his office and disappeared on the floor.

Midge Milken a security analyst from the director the NSA Fortaine notice at the Crypto report controlling a 999.999.999 $ code. She supposed that the translater breaked down or it was a virus. She informed the NSA senior Sys-sec Jabba, but didn?t believe her, but he tell her, that Stratmore is able to bypassed the translater. She broak into the NSA director?s office, but only there she got a printout from the translater proceedings. She found out, that it was truth. While she was in the office, the director come back from his holliday and he was very angree about the situation.

Regards Heike

[Yankee]

Hi Katrin

Here are my suggestions:

[Yankee]

Hi Heike

[Lissy]

Hello,

this my audio-book report today.

David Becker was looking for the punk girl and he knews, that she had left Sevillia at plan a day ago. He bought a vespa from a Spain and went to the airport. The girl that he met with the injury asked him for money. She told him, that she tried to fly to USA to her partens, but she left her money and couldn?t pay the fly. Because her injury Becker thougt she lay and she needed the money for drugs. As he noticed that the girls hair had the colours white, red and blue, he knews that was the punk girl, that he was looking for. He want to ask her about the ring, but she thought he want to annovance(?) She fired a stream of Pepper Gard into his eyes and Becker drooped on the floor. Out of his power he called her name. While the girl was runnig she heared her name and she came back to becker. The girl helped him and she gave him the ring.

Ok, more about the exiciting story tomorrow.

Regards Heike