| 'Have somebody wait' vs 'Have somebody waiting' | The conjunction "AND" |
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#1 (permalink) Mon Jul 03, 2006 5:52 am "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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Hello everybody
Please read the lines given below:Could you please explain the lines in bold to me? What is the writer trying to say?
I am sitting on a tomb, and when the time comes to piss again, I have my pick. Or I wander, hands clasped behind my back, among the slabs, the flat, the leaning and the upright, culling the inscriptions. Of these I never weary, there are always three or four of such drollery that I have to hold on to the cross, or the stele, or the angel, so as not to fall.Mine I composed long since and am still pleased with it, tolerably pleased. My other writings are no sooner dry than they revolt me, but my epitaph still meets with my approval. There is little chance unfortunately of its ever being reared above the skull that conceived it, unless the State takes up the matter.But to be uneatrhed I must first be found, and I fear those gentlemen will have as much trouble finding me dead as alive. So I hasten to record it here and now, while there is yet time:
Hereunder lies the above who up below So hourly died that he survived till now
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#2 (permalink) Mon Jul 03, 2006 21:30 pm "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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Hi Tom, This is classic example how to piss off moderators I mean iritate ha, ha...
pick - translate as choice (where to have a piss or under which tomb)
drollery - black humor? /some amusing transript or epitaph which shouldn't be amusing but become somehow,
skull (a man) how had thought (reared above)out the text of epitaph can't be sure they will write after his death that text unless State ( government) would take care of this.
To be unearthed you need to be remebered , and he is afraid to be forgotten after his death as he was ignored being alive.So to be sure they wouldn't miss the epitaph he writes now everything down.
Epitaph is weird and the "skull" is just sick and mental but if you want the tranlation...
Here lies the guy (written on tomb)above who finish lying below So hour after hour dying that somehow still alive up to now
Regards poetry expert Jan (burn this book) |
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Jan I'm here quite often ;-)
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#3 (permalink) Mon Jul 03, 2006 21:38 pm "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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| Jan wrote: |
Hi Tom, This is classic example how to piss off moderators I mean iritate ha, ha... |
:lol: :lol: :lol:
You seem to be pretty good at interpreting things, Cap'n Poetry Jan. :lol:
| Jan wrote: |
Regards poetry expert Jan (burn this book) |
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Amy _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#4 (permalink) Tue Jul 04, 2006 12:39 pm "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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Thanks a lot, Jan. :D
Dear Amy
How would you feel if I told you I needed some more explanation/ elaboration on the given lines? :shock: Please help!
1-...that I have to hold on to the cross, or the stele, or the angel, so as not to fall
2- But to be uneatrhed I must first be found...
3-Hereunder lies the above who up below So hourly died that he survived till now
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#5 (permalink) Tue Jul 04, 2006 13:05 pm "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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| Just off-topic :D Amy,I was sure that Tom would address to you anyway! |
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#6 (permalink) Tue Jul 04, 2006 15:50 pm "Hereunder lies the above who up below..." |
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| Tom wrote: |
1-...that I have to hold on to the cross, or the stele, or the angel, so as not to fall
He's laughing so hard from the "drollery" that he needs to hold on to the variious tombstones, etc. so that he doesn't fall.
2- But to be unearthed I must first be found...
Literally: Someone has to first find where I'm buried before they can dig me up.
3-Hereunder lies the above who up below So hourly died that he survived till now
This is the inscription that he's written for his own tombstone. hereunder => under this tombstone the above => refers to the name written on the tombstone above the inscription who up below So hourly died that he survived till now => whose life has been such a slow death that he has lived all the way up to now Tom |
Hi Tom
I've written down some fairly literal interpretations (blue). Not nearly as poetic as Cap'n Jan. :lol:
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