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#47 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 0:27 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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Hi Gourdet, Congratulations. I think your English is getting better as a beginner. Making mistakes and being aware of the correction is a good way to improve yourself. There are some misspelling in your writing and also some phrases that need to be checked in order to be clear. Go ahead, and improve yourself more and more.
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#48 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:01 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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Hi Aldro,
Many thanks for joining our forum and posting your sentences. Please find my suggestions below. Best regards. Torsten
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| He comes to home. |
He often comes home late.
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| She gos to school. |
She goes to school.
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| They drinks some tee. |
They usually have tea for breakfast.
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| I drive bicycle. |
I often ride my bicycle.
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| I know what's you mean. |
I know what you mean.
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| He runs faster. |
He runs faster than me.
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| The police gets the thief. |
The police often gets the thieves.
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#49 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:24 am simple present unit |
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Hi Teacher
I live in antofagasta city I work in westfire company I love playing electric guitar I have a rock band with some friends we play every weekend and sometimes when we have time my father knows what kind of music i like he loves listen the rock music
Can you tell me where I made a mistake please |
Hi Chiro,
Many thanks for joining our forum. Your sentences look quite good and you can find my suggestions below. Best regards. Torsten
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| I live in antofagasta city |
I live in Antofagasta.
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| I work in westfire company |
I work for Westfire.
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| I love playing electric guitar |
I love playing the electric guitar.
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| I have a rock band with some friends |
I have a rock brand together with some friends.
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| we play every weekend and sometimes when we have time |
We play every weekend and sometimes during the week too.
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| my father knows what kind of music i like |
My father knows what kind of music I like.
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| he loves listen the rock music |
He loves listening to rock music.
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#50 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:25 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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| hungvtlmn wrote: |
Hi all,
Every single day of mine, I visit English-test.net and every times I find a new idea on that webpage. My friends pots their sentence and get the fitback from teacher as me too. Thanks to all and really want to learn more and more. |
Hi hungvtlmn,
Many thanks for your feedback. It's great to hear you and your frineds like using our forum. I look forward to your next messages. Best regards, Torsten
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#51 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:30 am simple preant |
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I get up in the morning . I drive by Bus. I go to office every day at 9 o'clock. and i take breakfeast at 10 o'clock in the moring. |
Dear kishanphp,
Thanks a lot for joining our forum. Your sentences look pretty good and you can find my suggestions below:
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| I get up in the morning . |
I usually get up early in the morning.
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| I drive by Bus. |
I usually go to work by bus.
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| I go to office every day at 9 o'clock. |
I get to the office at 9 o'clock every day and I usually have breakfast at 10 o'clock.
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#52 (permalink) Tue Aug 19, 2008 9:45 am simple sentance |
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| rizwanahmed wrote: |
Hi, Torsen
Please check my below sentences which I made myself.
I run fast. She speaks true. He likes to study historical book. He makes tea. they come daily. you come Yes, I come daily. they understand what I say with them. He lives in a larg city of pakistan. you want to work here. I work here. they go there. I do exercise daily. they do exercise daily. He expects that I will be passed into my next exam. He knows I can speak urdu and english.
Thanks & Regards, |
Hi Rizwanahmed,
Thanks a lot for your sentences which look pretty good. Please find my suggestions below. Regards. Torsten
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| I run fast. |
I can run fast.
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| She speaks true. |
She says the truth.
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| He likes to study historical book. |
He likes to study history.
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| He makes tea. |
He often makes tea./He likes making tea.
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| they come daily. |
They come to our office very day.
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| Yes, I come daily. |
I go to the office very day.
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| they understand what I say with them. |
They usually understand what I tell them.
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| He lives in a larg city of pakistan. |
He lives in a large city in Pakistan.
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| you want to work here. |
I know you want to work here.
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| I work here. |
Very good!
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| they go there. |
They go there every year.
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| I do exercise daily. |
I exercise very day.
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| He expects that I will be passed into my next exam. |
He expects me to pass my next exam.
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| He knows I can speak urdu and english. |
He knows I can speak Urdu and English.
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#53 (permalink) Mon Aug 25, 2008 5:17 am hello teachers! |
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This is my simple present.
Hello. My name is Hebe Amado and I live in Argentina in a city calls Trelew. I study Biochemestry at UNT. I like cats very much. My best friend´s name is Alex and she´s from Peru but she lives in Dallas, Texas. We both like New kids on the block the most popular boy band in the whole word.
It was good? tell me please!!! Thanks all of you. |
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#54 (permalink) Mon Aug 25, 2008 10:51 am hello teachers! |
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Hello Hebe,
Thanks a lot for posting your text which looks very good. Please find my suggestions in bold.
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This is my simple present text.
Hello. My name is Hebe Amado and I live in Argentina in a city called Trelew. I study Biochemistry at UNT. I like cats very much. My best friend's name is Alex and she's from Peru but she lives in Dallas, Texas. We both like New Kids On The Block, the most popular boy band in the whole word.
Was it good? Tell me please! Thanks to all of you. |
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#55 (permalink) Tue Aug 26, 2008 8:08 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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I study physics He and she studies maths
I go chruch They go temple He goes chruch
I talk about science They talk about god She talks about god
I want become a scientist They want become a doctor He wants become a polatician |
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#56 (permalink) Tue Aug 26, 2008 10:21 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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Hi Torsten
My name is Dem and I live in France. I like playing football. My best friend’s name is Richey and he likes playing football too. We both like our coach.
I will come home today He comes home late
She goes to work once a year I often go to the stream
He often drinks a lot of alcohol I drink water after meal
I know your name He knows my name
He says he’s going out
I can run very fast But She runs faster than I
Please make corrections where necessary.
Thanks Julie.:) |
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#57 (permalink) Wed Aug 27, 2008 10:08 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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Hi Mr Torsen. I come home late at night But she comes home earlier than me. I often go to school by motorbike And she also goes by motorbike. I drink three glasses of milk everyday. she only drinks one glass of milk. I know how to swim. But she can swims very well.
I want to become a diplomat she wants to become a business.
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#58 (permalink) Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:03 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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I see that the exercise about present simple is to write some sentences. Let's see what comes in my mind now. I'm unemployed at the moment. I gave up my work some time ago. And now here are some sentences related to my daily program. I usually get up at about 9:30 in the morning. I make my bed and I put on some clothes that I use at home. I have breakfast with my father because he is at home until 11:30. And than I sit in front of the computer and I start reading my email and doing exercises in English. I spend almost all my day in front of the computer, sometimes reading or learning and naturally listening to the music.
I think that I finish my sentences for now. Sorry that i've used other tenses as well, but it is not easy to write a story using only one tense.
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#59 (permalink) Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:05 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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Hi Torsten,
I read some examples of present simple put forward in the forum by some. And I also read your correction one. I saw some sentences which I think is correct but you remade the sentence by putting words like often, everyday. I know we write present simple when we do that thing consistently. Does that mean every present simple tense has to be with those words (often, everyday)? |
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#60 (permalink) Wed Aug 27, 2008 11:53 am Simple Present (Unit 7) |
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I get up early in the morning. I drink one glass milk before the breakfast. I go to office at 9 am daily except saturday and sunday and come back to my home at 6 pm. I drive very slowely becouse I am in learning process. |
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