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TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools... #1 (permalink) Thu Jul 27, 2006 8:52 am   TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools...
 

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Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

The good education is the way for a good career.Nowadays the education abroad is most popular. If I have a chance I want to study in a Top University outside my home country. There is two reasons about it - I will take a better education and I will learn a second language like my native language.
Today the best companies prefer to take employees with education from a Top Universities. A good english is need too. When you live and study outside your home country, you have a chance to meet new people,to find a different places, to have a different kind of life. Some students are never been lived without their parents before.This is a chance to be a separate person.

The education abroad give you a chance to change your life, to learn more about people from foreing countries, to have a friend with them. Often students live in hostels with an young people from all world. This is a good possibility to learn to live in tolerance with everyone.

I want all of this to be my future life. My dream is to study in university in USA. This education will help me to find a good work in a Big Corporation.

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TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools... #2 (permalink) Thu Jul 27, 2006 10:08 am   TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools...
 

Hi,

Again my suggestions are in CAPITALS:

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The/A good education is the way/PATH for/TO a good career.Nowadays the/AN education abroad is most popular. If I have a chance I want to study in a Top University outside my home country. There is/ARE two reasons about it/FOR THIS - I will take/GET a better education and I will learn a second language like my native language.
Today the best companies prefer to take employees with education from a Top Universities/A TOP UNIVERSITY. A good /KNOWLEDGE OF ENGLISH english is needED too. When you live and study outside your home country, you have a chance to meet new people,to find (a) different places, to have a different kind of life. Some students are/HAVE never (been) lived without their parents before.This is a chance to be a separate person/AN INDIVIDUAL.

The/AN education abroad giveS you a chance to change your life, to learn more about people from foreing/FOREIGN countries, to have a friend/MAKE FRIENDS WITH THEM with them. Often students live in hostels with an/OTHER young people from all OVER world. This is a good possibility/OPPORTUNITY to learn to live in tolerance with everyone.

I want all of this to be my future life. My dream is to study in/AT university in THE USA. This education will help me to find a good work in a Big Corporation.



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TOEFL essay sample: Education is one of the important assets #3 (permalink) Fri Jul 28, 2006 3:36 am   TOEFL essay sample: Education is one of the important assets
 

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Many students choose to attend schools or universities outside their home countries. Why do some students study abroad?

Education is one of the important assets that an individual should have. With education, an individual is assured of good future. One can find a good job and better career opportunity in life. Education also make an individual become a more refined member of a society. It is important to prepare for education for one's future. Taking education outside one's country have several advantages such as one can choose a better school, it also prepare an individual to be independent while in other country, and more importantly is that one can acquire academic knowledge but also obtain cultural exchanges with another country.

Choosing a good school to study is very important for an individual. It is true than in one country there maybe a school that offer your chosen course or career but if one has a opportunity to go to a much better school I think one should to it. A better school will carry a good credential once one finish his studies. A good credential from a well known school or reputable school has advantages in landing for a better job than a student who just graduated in a small college or unknown university. This is especially true if one is applying for international job. Employers often ask your school because they are looking for graduates from good school.

Becoming independent is also important for an individual student wanting to study abroad. Knowing oneself is one of the important task than an individual must know. Often it is the most difficult. Facing different obstacles of being alone in a foreign country will develop innovativeness of an individual. One will learn to adopt to difficulties and how to cope with those difficulties which has an effect on his future as one goes thru the real world in society. One has to encounter many problems and obstacles in life and with the learning one has acquired in being an independent in being alone in another country he will be able to cope more easily than other. His learning has made him more prepared in the many different situation in life.

For student looking forward for living and working abroad or in another country, the cultural experience one has gained from another country will put him in an anvantage. Learning does not only limited to books and lectures. It also involves cultural and societal adaptation like language and certain cultural practices. Language is very important because it is the only way where one can explain or share his/her idea to others, and to understand other people. This kind of experience gained from studying in other country is truly very educational and enriching for an individual.

Truly education is an important part of ones life. With this one will be assured of a better future. Success in life especially in career will greatly depend on what kind of educational background one has acquired. It should be kept in mind that in real world - that is outside the confine of the school and our home - there are factors are beyond one's control especially in career. One would greatly have a great advantage if he has obtained a good education from good school.
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TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools... #4 (permalink) Sat Jul 29, 2006 16:32 pm   TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools...
 

Hi Reji,

My suggestions are in CAPITAL LETTERS:

Quote:
Education is one of the important assets that an individual should have. With education, an individual is assured of A good future. One can find a good job and better career opportunity in life. Education also makeS an individual become a more refined member of a society. It is important to prepare for education for one's future. Taking education outside one's country have/HAS several advantages such as one can choose a better school, it also prepareS an individual to be independent while in ANother country, and more importantly IT is that one can acquire academic knowledge but also obtain cultural exchanges with another country.

Choosing a good school to study is very important for an individual. It is true than in one country there maybe a school that offerS your chosen course or career but if one has a opportunity to go to a much better school I think one should to/DO it. A better school will carry a good credential once one finishES his/ONE'S studies. A good credential from a well known school or reputable school has advantages in landing for/GETTING /LANDING YOU a better job than a student who just graduated in a small college or unknown university. This is especially true if one is applying for AN international job. Employers often ask your school because they are looking for graduates from A good school.

Becoming independent is also important for an individual student wanting to study abroad. Knowing oneself is one of the important taskS thaT an individual must know. Often it is the most difficult. Facing different obstacles of being alone in a foreign country will develop THE innovativeness of an individual. One will learn to adApt to difficulties and how to cope with those difficulties which has an effect on his/ONE'S future as one goes thru the real world in society. One has to encounter many problems and obstacles in life and with the learning one has acquired in being an independent in being alone in another country he/ONE will be able to cope more easily than ANother. His /YOUR learning has made him/YOU more prepared in the many different situationS in life.

For A student looking forward for/TO living and working abroad or in another country, the cultural experience one has gained from another country will put him in an anvantage. Learning does/IS not only limited to books and lectures. It also involves cultural and societal adaptation like language and certain cultural practices. Language is very important because it is the only way where one can explain or share his/her ideaS to/WITH others, and to understand other people. This kind of experience gained from studying in ANother country is truly very educational and enriching for an individual.

Truly education is an important part of one's life. With this one will be assured of a better future. Success in life especially in ONE'S career will greatly depend on what kind of educational background one has acquired. It should be kept in mind that in THE real world - that is outside the confineS of the school and our home - there are factors THAT are beyond one's control especially in A career. One would (greatly) have a great advantage if he has/ONE obtained a good education from A good school.


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TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools... #5 (permalink) Mon Aug 07, 2006 19:35 pm   TOEFL essay: Many students choose to attend schools...
 

Migration has been a very fundamental nature of humankind since the time of existence. There may be different reasons for it, like in an ancient time, purpose was to find food and build a community whereas today, in morden age, we migrate in order to make our bright future. As education is being valuable and achieving international level, it has become necessary for any student to gain education that is widely accepted for their bright future. Today, because of advance in transportation it become convenient and affortable for students to get education in other countries.

Better education is every one's dream. one can get good job oppotunity. As we all know, concept of education has become very broad so one has to think out of box. Sometimes one cannot immagine how far the world has gone, one has to go with the flow in order to build a successful carrer in this comptitive world. Studing abroad is a very good opportunity for any one. Besides getting good education, it also offers other advantages, like, increasing ones general knowledge, facing the rael life problems and so on. It also helps to boost ones cofidence.

Finally, education is our biggest credit in our life. Noone knows what will we have tomorrow but if one has good education he/she can start life all over again. studing abroad is a golden opportunity for students which helps them to become independable and much clever.
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