TOEFL essay: Why do people attend college or university?

[bulgarian]

TOEFL essay

Topic

Why do people attend college or university?

Every year many students in all world attend college or university. There are different reasons about this.All of this people try to develop themselves in the college. But I do not think that the time spent in the college is lost time.

One of the reasons that people go to the college is because they want to prepare themselves for a good career.The students learn theoretically and practically how to solve problems in the real work situations. They take knowleges in specific areas and this helps them to be a professionals.

Some people go to the college because they like to learn. Usually this students continuos their education and win awards in sciens.They have a good chance to express a good learning possibilities.

Other people go to college because they can meet people who like to learn. They can meet a new friends from all world. This is the way to make an interesting social experiece. In the college atmosphere everyone can try to be a leader, to develop communication skills with students and lecturers.

Nowadays a higher education is nessesity.The college in an investment in personal future. This is and my reason to be a student.
_________________
I am from Bulgaria

[hema]

As we all know that today education is very important in our lives. we always seek luxurious life which need decent amount of money and well educated person can get it easily than noneducated. however, there are many other reasons for which people attend college or university.

first, as i mentioned above, to live decent life and to make good money people go to college. If person is well qualified he/she can get blue collar job. sometimes they don't even need to look for a job but opportunity comes to them.

second reason could be the status in society. some people want to achieve higher and respective status in their society by getting higher education. for example, in our society if the person is phamacist or MD, he/she recieves special respect in any cultural or social activities.

third, some people want to enjoy college because this time of our life is very cheerful and enjoyable. In college students are free from social and family matters and they don't have any kind of responsibilities but their studies. they have friends who are very intimate members in our lives. actually, i have enjoyed a lot in my college days.

in conclusion, i would say that college is very important place for all of us to improve our quality of life as it teach us good manners and increase our knowledge. college has became essential for every students in order to make their own identity in this competitive world.

please give me some suggestions on my grammer, vocabulary and sentance structure.

thank you.