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Email reply correction #1 (permalink) Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:28 am   Email reply correction
 

Dear Sir
Please would you correct for my short email below which is written to my superior.

Thanks a lot,

Dear boss:

Below is the price offer from ....... company, they can only provide us the Tapioca chips and Cashew nuts, the others are not available.

With regarding to the ground nuts, I shall seek for another company.

Will let you know if there is any new information

Regards,
Kelly
I'm new here and I like it ;-)


Joined: 25 Apr 2006
Posts: 21
Location: HongKong

Email reply #2 (permalink) Tue Aug 08, 2006 10:38 am   Email reply
 

Hi Kelly

Here is my suggestion:

Kelly wrote:
Dear/Hello (boss's name),

Below is the price offer from .......company. They can only provide us with the tapioca chips and cashew nuts. The other items are not available.

With regard to the ground nuts, I will look for a different company.

I'll let you know as soon as there is any new information.

Regards,


Amy
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I'm a Communicator ;-)


Joined: 16 Apr 2006
Posts: 8265
Location: USA

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