Toefl Essay: You have enough money to purchase either...

[shiny22]

Toefl Essay

You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.

Money is an essential part of everyday life, people work hard to earn money through which one can satisfy their many desires like to buy a well furnished house with modern technologies or buy a business.

If I had enough money I would like to buy a bungalow near a sea face which is my childhood dream. I will do its interior myself, curtains will be of silk fabric ,walls with sky blue hue ,cane furniture ,modular kitchen , Italian flooring and marble ,to make the house smell good and aesthetic I will place scented candles fresh roses ,frames and statues.

House is a place where one would like to find solace after a stressed day. I feel like having our own house is very precious in this busy life. It’s a life long investment; it’s not like business where there is possibility that you can suffer loss if business doesn’t work. It will be a shelter for my family from extreme weather. I can rest ,talk ,shout in my home, I can cook what I wish ,use bathroom ,watch television ,listen music without anyone’s interference. I can keep lights on when I need. I can provide roof to any needy whose is new to place, who have an interview or an exam the other day. If I am ill I would like to have rest in my home.

I want to buy a house near a sea face, so that I can view sunrise, sunset, and horizon. I can enjoy zephyr. I can go for a mooring walk on beach.

No one can leave in a hotel or a hostel for long time. Its fine to stay their if I am in a University or visiting some place. House is must for everyone, even a bird likes to rest in their know nest.

House provides happiness, comfort to me, investing my money by buying a house is a like a dream comes true. If I wish to sell it anytime I will get my money back, not like in business if it doesn’t show profit everything is lost. House gives me in return peace of mind; I feel my hard earned money is utilized properly.

[Alan]

Hi,

I have made some suggestions in CAPITAL letters:

[shiny22]

Thank you, Alan.

Shiny