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Hi all
I would like to improve my english. So please help me to do so.I will write a paragraph about rain.

Rain whihc soothes me when ever I see that. In my village Rain means flood. Lot of paddy fields covered with water. People do fishing during that time. Our schools starts in june after a long winter holidays. In june rain will be there without any fail

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Hi ,

Alan apologize me...

Rain which soothes me whenever I feel that. According to my villagers
Rain is nothing but flood because their paddy fields are covered with rain water.people who do fishing at the time are adversably affected by rain.Usually our school starts in june after a long winter holidays.we will get the usual rain in june as well.

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The post was really helpful to understand my flaws.
Thanks swami.I will post my naive english text again. Hope you will do the correction again