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TOEFLŪ essay: Whether or not own a car in the big city



 
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TOEFL essay: Whether or not own a car in the big city #1 (permalink) Wed Sep 27, 2006 22:30 pm   TOEFL essay: Whether or not own a car in the big city
 

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In my view, there is no need to purchase a car in the big city, if the city has a good transportation system and better connectivity from one place to another. If we do not buy a car we will help our country, our city and ourselves. The most important way is by decreasing air and noise pollution. If we do not have a car we will decrease the rate of car accidents and traffic jam also. In some countries roads are very narrow and if everybody drives a car, it will block the roads. In big city, we have local trains and bus connectivity we should use them and avoid purchasing a car. Use of public transportation will get free ourselves from a lot of tensions. To drive a car we would need to keep a license. Some emergency cash will also be needed while driving.
But many times car is useful also in big cities. Suppose, some body get injured or sometimes you want to go for picnic at that time car is very useful.

Car is not a need of big city if you would like to find a pollution free country or city.

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TOEFL essay: Whether or not own a car in the big city #2 (permalink) Thu Sep 28, 2006 9:17 am   TOEFL essay: Whether or not own a car in the big city
 

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In my view, there is no need to purchase a car in the/A big city, if the city has a good transportation system and better connectivity/CONNECTIONS from one place to another. If we do not buy a car we will help our country, our city and ourselves. The most important way WE CAN DO THIS is by decreasing air and noise pollution. If we do not have a car, we will decrease/REDUCE the rate of car accidents and traffic jam also. In some countries roads are very narrow and if everybody drives a car, it will block the roads. In A big city, we have local trains and bus connectivity/CONNECTIONS we should use them and avoid purchasing a car. Use of public transportation will (get) ENABLE US TO free ourselves from a lot of tensions. To drive a car we would need to keep/HOLD a license. Some emergency cash will also be needed while driving.
But many times A car is useful also in big cities. Suppose, somebody getS injured or sometimes you want to go for A picnic THEN at that time A car is very useful.

A Car is not a need/NECESSITY (of) IN A big city if you would like/WANT to find a pollution free country or city.



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