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#2 (permalink) Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:57 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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. I agree that something really ought to be done to make this sentence more readable. The words 'in' and 'inside' could be put in quotes or they could be italicized.
In the sentence, the usage of the words whereas and however is not correct. You can use one or the other in this sentence, but not both. Since the word however is the target word, I would suggest simply deleting the word whereas. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#3 (permalink) Fri Jul 29, 2011 9:38 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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Hi,
Why "when" is incorrect?
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Wly I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Fri Jul 29, 2011 10:47 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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The word needs to describe an opposing viewpoint. 'When' is not used for that purpose.
As Yankee says, the lack of punctuation and use of 'whereas' means that this sentence appears to be a total mess. Unfortunately I don't have access to this test to be able to edit it. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#5 (permalink) Sat Jul 30, 2011 4:56 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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Hi,Beeesneees
Thank you for your reply. And the question seems don't have the problem you said now.
But why we need to use however. I think "in" and "into" not the opposite words. Can we use "when" or "while" in this sentence? |
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Wly I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#6 (permalink) Sat Jul 30, 2011 11:02 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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You could use 'while' but it is not an option. 'When' is incorrect there. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#7 (permalink) Mon Aug 01, 2011 9:37 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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Hi,Beeesneees
Thank you again. And can you tell me what is the difference between "when" and "while". Could you take an example for me?
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#9 (permalink) Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:58 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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Hi Wly,
Very generally 'when' refers to a time and 'while' refers to a 'duration'.
Look at these:
I learned the language when I lived in that country. This specifies the time when you did this,
I learned how to cook while I lived (I was living) on my own. This refers to something you did during that period of time.
Alan _________________ English as a Second Language You can read my ESL story Present Simple |
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#10 (permalink) Tue Aug 02, 2011 10:04 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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Hi,Beeesneees and Alan
Thank you for your reply. You always reply soon and give me good explanation. It's really useful. Thank you :)
Best regards. |
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Wly I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#11 (permalink) Tue Aug 02, 2011 11:13 am Speaking about words, as the subject |
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I would still encourage you to use a dictionary before asking such questions. It's what will turn you into an independent learner. :) _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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