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TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others #1 (permalink) Wed Oct 04, 2006 6:36 am   TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others
 

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? Face to face communication is better than other types of communication such as letters , email or telephone calls . Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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Nowadays , there are a lot of communication means in the modern world such as telephone , mail , or electronic mail, faxes . Some people argue that using letter , or modern types of communication help them adapt with this busy world . However, in my opinion , face to face communication has noticeable features for which no other means could substitute

First of all , face to face communication afford people to understand what attendants would like to say deeply , thoroughly . They can recognize what the partner want to convey by observing body languages , the attitudes, manners . For instance , last year , I heard my brother mentioned that he quit the current job and got another accompany with happy looking so I knew that he was happy to do that . On the other hand , If he had mailed me , I would haven’t understood his mood .

Secondly , we could get outcomes much more effectively . In such types of communication , we could revise the content in the talking process to adapt with the appearance of attendants . For example , when we persuade someone to do something , we can change the way to approach if we observe that he seem to disapprove what we say

Last but not least , the feelings that face to face communication bring to us cannot substitute by other means of communications , such as the feeling of joy when we receive happy news . These feelings can only be carried by the direct communication

All in all , In this modern world , the advanced technology has been bringing closer real dialogues, but these never do these alternatives bring the true feelings , the effectiveness , the clear interpersonal understanding as face to face communication do
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TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others #2 (permalink) Wed Oct 04, 2006 10:25 am   TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others
 

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Nowadays , there are a lot of communication means/METHODS OF COMMUNICATION in the modern world such as THE telephone , mail , or electronic mail, faxes . Some people argue that using A letter , or modern types of communication help them adapt with/TO this busy world . However, in my opinion , face to face communication has noticeable features for which no other means could BE substituteD
First of all , face to face communication affordS people THE CHANCE to understand what attendants??? would like to say deeply , thoroughly . They can recognize what the partner wantS to convey by observing body languages , (the attitudes), manners . For instance , last year , I heard my brother mentioned/MENTION that he quit the current job and got another ONE (accompany with happy looking) AND WAS LOOKING HAPPY so I knew that he was happy to do that . On the other hand , If he had mailed me , I would haven’t understood his mood .
Secondly , we could get outcomes much more effectively . In such types of communication , we could revise the content in the talking process to adapt with/TO the appearance of attendants??? . For example , when we persuade someone to do something , we can change the way to WE approach THE SUBJECT if we observe that he seemS to disapprove OF what we say
Last but not least , the feelings that face to face communication bring to us cannot BE substituteD by other means of communications , such as the feeling of joy when we receive happy news . These feelings can only be carried/CONVEYED by (the) direct communication
All in all , In this modern world , the advanced technology has been bringing closer real dialogues/HAS BROUGHT REAL DIALOGUE CLOSER, but these?? WHAT? never do these alternatives bring the true feelings , the effectiveness , the clear interpersonal understanding as face to face communication doES



Again check agreement between subject and verb.

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TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others #3 (permalink) Thu Oct 05, 2006 4:32 am   TOEFL essay Face to face communication is better than others
 

thankyou Alan
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