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TOEFLŪ essay sample: Some qualities of a good parent



 
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TOEFL essay sample: Some qualities of a good parent #1 (permalink) Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:16 am   TOEFL essay sample: Some qualities of a good parent
 

What are the some qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to your answer.

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If we think about the future of the child, the role of their parent come first in the rows. Because parents are considered as the first teacher of the child. It is through their parent that the children learn not only talking and walking but also about the moral values, and ethic. Therefore, following are some of the most important qualities I feel is required for good parent.

Firstly, the love; Love is one of the most important features in proper development of the children. For example, if we compare the children who grows with loving parent and that of children who grows by themselves without the parent love. The nature of the child without parents is more aggressive, less compassion and lacks caring nature for the society. So, to have good society, the love of parent becomes necessary.

Secondly, the discipline; discipline is another important characters of human beings. Without discipline one cannot become a productive human being. It is therefore the responsible of the parent to correct their children when they are on wrong track. The children should be continuously teach and make them to understand what are good and what are bad. They should be make responsible for their misdeed and try to correct them.

Thirdly, habit; when children are born they are like empty vessel. It is up to their parent what to put in and not. If we teach them about good habit they will adapt to it, which will help them when they grow older. Like parent should make habit of reading books to their children, the caring for other.

Likewise there is other many qualities that are essentials for the goods parent.

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TOEFL essay sample: Some qualities of a good parent #2 (permalink) Fri Oct 06, 2006 8:47 am   TOEFL essay sample: Some qualities of a good parent
 

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If we think about the future of the child, the role of their/THE parent comeS (first in the rows) TOP OF THE LIST because parents are considered as the first teacher of the child. It is through their parent that the children learnS not only talking and walking but also about (the) moral values, and ethicS. Therefore, THE following are some of the most important qualities I feel is/ARE required for A good parent.

Firstly, (the) love; Love is one of the most important features in THE proper development of (the) children. For example, if we compare the children who grows/GROW with A loving parent and that of children who grows/GROW UP by themselves without the parent/WITHOUT PARENTAL LOVE love. The nature of the child without parents is more aggressive, less compassionATE and lacks A caring nature for (the) society. So, to have A good society, the love of Aparent becomes necessary.

Secondly, (the) discipline; discipline is another important characters/CHARACTERISTIC of human beings. Without discipline one cannot become a productive human being. It is therefore the responsible/RESPONSIBILITY of the parent to correct their children when they are on THE wrong track. The children should be continuously teach/TAUGHT and make them/MADE to understand what are/IS good and what are/IS bad. They should be make/MADE responsible for their misdeedS and try to correct them.

Thirdly, habit; when children are born they are like empty vesselS. It is up to their parent what to put in and WHAT not. If we teach them about good habitS they will adapt to it,/THEY WILL ADOPT THEM which will help them when they grow older. (Like) parentS should make A habit of reading books to their children, (the caring for other0 CARING FOR OTHERS.

Likewise there is/ARE other many /MANY OTHER qualities that are essentials/ESSENTIAL for /A GOOD PARENT the goods parent.



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