The use of the comma: 'When Sam Winters returned...'

Tom · Mon Oct 16, 2006 21:50 pm *The use of the comma: 'When Sam Winters returned...'*

Hi

Could you please tell me which one of the folowing seems better to you?

1- When Sam Winters returned from the war his job at TCS Studios was waiting for him.

2- When Sam Winters returned from the war, his job at TCS Studios was waiting for him.

Tom

Yankee · Mon Oct 16, 2006 21:57 pm *The use of the comma: 'When Sam Winters returned...'*

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I vote for the comma, Tom. Very Happy

Amy
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Mister Micawber · Tue Oct 17, 2006 15:23 pm *The use of the comma: 'When Sam Winters returned...'*

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Me too. Or 'me, too'.
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