#2 (permalink) Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:35 am TOEFL essay sample: Learning languages helps you in many... |
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Hi Delta,
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People from different cultures learn other languages in order to communicate with each other(s).
Further more, we should learn other cultures and languages to be able to understand what others believe . My advice to foreign people is to learn laugauges/LANGUAGES and specially THE English language for many reasons: First, learning English helps those foreign people to talk with native English speakers when they travel to their countries (and) so that they will be able to communicate with each other(s).
Then, when someone wants to learn ABOUT English culture(s) and believes it's (so) important to know how to understand and how to speak English (so that) (you) can understand this culture very well.
Moreover,THE English language is a very big and wonderful language (the) AND is spoken all over the world nowadays . People from different backgrounds speak English and consider it as an important language in many fields such as AT work and IN schools.
In conclusion, learning languages helps us to know and to learn others cultures and believes. |
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