#2 (permalink) Mon Oct 23, 2006 19:30 pm TOEFL essay: If you could change one important thing about |
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Varanasi, the holy city in India is well known in THE whole world. Every tourist who comes to India always makeS sure that he/she visits Varanasi. But there is one thing which I would like to change out of many and that is, water pollution at/IN the river Ganges.
Water pollution is known to all of us today and only we are responsible for making this world a better place to live IN. THE River Ganges is considered the holy river in India and most of the local population take A bath, clean clothes, throw waste(s) and even get/HAVE A sewer outlet inTO the river. This not only makes the river look dirty, but even gives birth to many medical problems.
THE Indian government has been contributing a lot of resources to keep the city and the river clean, but even then the local people dont/DON'T DO NOT really follow the law and keep treating the river the way their ancestors used to.
Many non profit organisations have been working to make people aware how this pollution would affect them in years to come. Progress can be seen but its/IT'S/IT IS slow.
In conclusion, I hope to see changes for THE river Ganges in THE coming years and I wish more touristS should come to India and experience the magic with every sunrise and sunset at/ON THE River Ganges at/IN Varanasi. |
Alan _________________ English as a Second Language You can read my ESL story Present Simple |
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