Toefl® essay sample: The student evaluate their teachers

[Ellie]

Toefl essay sample

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Even there is belief the student can't evaluate their teacher exactly because their ability is not enough to examine their teacher, I think schools should ask students this.

First of all, this evaluation needs for helping students' the better opportunity to take the better learning from teachers. As they have taken teachers' lesson, students probably know what they more need from their teacher.
Depends on their learning ability for speacial study area, they would have different kind of asking to their teachers.
When they freely speak what they want exactly from the teacher, school make satisfied stuedents' requesting.

Moreover, this evaluation also help teachers. Even they make their effort hardly to teach students, there exist some weak points what they don't recognize. After they receive the evaluation result, they can realize what students' needs and then they apply new methods later.
For some teachers, it is hard to admit what are their weak points than admit their strong points. But if they know exactly what they have to do for students, they could try the better teaching methods.

Still the evaluation form is not enough to evaluate the teacher's ability exactly, anyway I believe the fact that students evaluation help both students and teachers.

[Alan]

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