TOEFL® essay samples: Studying the English Language...

[Butterfly]

This is one of the first essays I have written as I'm just starting to prepare for the exam! What do you think?
Please, correct me if it's necessary!

TOEFL Essay Topic:
Studying the English Language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree ot disagree with this statement?

Toefl essay samples

Spending time in an English-speaking country is a really essential experience for the English-learners as well as the best way to study the language. However, I believe that there are many other strategies for learning English, which are useful enough.

In the first place,studying in an English-speaking country such as Australia gives you a variety of opportunities to improve your speaking and listening skills. Moreover, you practise your English while doing ordinary things, for instance, shopping. Consequently, you become more self-confident. Being overseas is the best way to learn the language effectively.

Secondly, providing that the learner is hard-working enough, they can learn English even in their own country. The English Language Schools provide their students with a wide range of opportunities to master the language. Furthermore, there are different methods to practise your skills such as watching English television, reading English books, magazines,etc. The combination of some of these methods might be a really useful strategy.

In conclusion, there are many advantages of living in an English-speaking country as this is the best strategy to learn the language. Nevertheless, if the student is responsible and works hard, they can achieve success in studying English not only in a country where the language is widely spoken.

[Butterfly]

Please make necessary corrections.

[Behruz]

Best essay! You are brilliant!

[Kitosdad]

Good afternoon Butterfly. Little correction is needed in your essay.

Whatever faults that you have will automatically correct themselves with further reading and speaking to English-speakers. Good Luck.

kITOS:
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