IELTS essay sample: Should wealthy nations be required to...

[katat]

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic.

Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

IELTS essay sample

With the development of global economic, more and more people have a better life than decades ago. However, in some area of world, there also have poorer countries where people don't have sufficient food to eat or education. I think that, not only should wealthy country help poor country, but poor country should try their best to give their citizens a better quality of life.

Helping poorer countries is demand of moral, but also there are many benefits from it. First of all, providing assistant to these countries could save many lives from starvation, and keep them away from diseases, therefore people in the poorer country could enjoy a better life. Furthermore, this could help them to have enough energy to develop their country, and then providing food and education by themselves. Eventually, they would be able to cooperate with wealthy countries to benefit each other.

To poorer country, besides being assisted by others, they have to take responsibility of developing their own country for better quality of citizens' life. However, some use the resources provided by others in a wrong way, such as taking the money to buy weapons, food to support the war. They should stop doing this, and to develop in peace. In addition, improving their stability of society, such as perfecting their laws, providing job opportunities, developing technology, is a important task for them.

Therefore, it's wrong to say that one country should take the whole responsibility of that. Countries in the world should help each other to have a better development, by doing this, countries can benefit from each other also.

[Alan]

Hi,

With the development of global economic/THE GLOBAL ECONOMY, more and more people have a better life than decades ago. However, in some areaS of THE world, there also have/ARE poorer countries where people don't have sufficient food to eat or ANY education. I think that, not only should wealthy country/COUNTRIES help poor countryCOUNTRIES, but A poor country should try their best to give their citizens a better quality of life.

Helping poorer countries is demand of moral/IS A MORAL REQUIREMENT, but also there are many benefits from it. First of all, providing assistanCE to these countries could save many lives from starvation, and keep them away from diseases, therefore people in the poorer country could enjoy a better life. Furthermore, this could help them to have enough energy to develop their country, and then providing/PROVIDE food and education by/FOR themselves. Eventually, they would be able to cooperate with wealthy countries to benefit each other.

Poorer countrIES, besides being assisted by others, thave to take responsibility of/FOR developing their own country for A better quality of/FOR THEIR citizens' life. However, some use the resources provided by others in a wrong way, such as taking the money to buy weapons, food to support the war. They should stop doing this, and develop in peace. In addition, improving thE stability of society, such as perfecting their laws, providing job opportunities, developing technology, is aN important task for them.

Therefore, it's wrong to say that one country should take the whole responsibility of/FOR that. Countries in the world should help each other to have a better development, by doing this, countries can benefit from each other also.

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[katat]

Thank you very much, Alan ^^

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