TOEFL® essay: Our parents our best teachers

[Englishtestspyder]

TOEFL essay

Our life goes through many stations, first we are youg children, then we are teenagers, later we are adults and we finish with being old man or women. In all these steps of our lives, we do our best to learn and benefit from the short lifetime ...

The best and most important period of lives is childhood, it's imoprtant because it defines how we are going to face life in the futur. So at that age, we try to learn from different people and places, different factors play in one way or another a very important role in teaching us something, especially our parents, school and the outside environement, that is to say freinds and other foreign people. So which of these factors is considred the best teacher?

In my opinion, parents play a major and very important role in teaching their children,for many reasons I totaly agree with the statement that says that they are the best teachers .

Our parents are the first people we see at birth, they are the people who we spend most of our time with, especially in childhood .. they are the ones who teach us how to talk, how to eat, how to think ... They are similar to us, and they affect us with their ways of thinking, and their habits. Young children don't feel safe only with their parents, because they know that they do their best to protect them, and will do their best to see them acheive success, they give them advices and very important opinions, they give them the experience they need while facing problems without hiding nothing, because they want them to solve their problem. They love to see them happy, and will feel sad if they see them unhappy.

OUr parents are considred our first school, they are the ones who help us believe on ourselves, help us have a strong personality, help us know what's wrong and what's right, know our obligations and our rights. Whenever we have problems we seek our parents, and they open their arms and do their best to help us.

To sum up, parents are considred our freinds, our doctors, and with no doubt our best teachers, they are our closest family, we are part of them, they would even sacrifice their life to see us successful.

[Alan]

HI,

Our life goes through many stations/STAGES, first we are youg children, then we are teenagers, later we are adults and we finish with being old mEn or women. In all these steps/PARTS of our lives, we do our best to learn and benefit from the short lifetime ...

The best and most important period of OUR lives is childhood, it's imoprtant because it defines how we are going to face life in the futurE. So at that age, we try to learn from different people and places, different factors play in one way or another a very important role in teaching us something, especially our parents, school and the outside environment, that is to say frIEnds and other foreign people. So which of these factors is considred the best teacher?

In my opinion, parents play a major and very important role in teaching their children,for many reasons I totaly agree with the statement that says that they are the best teachers .

Our parents are the first people we see at birth, they are the people who we spend most of our time with, especially in childhood .. they are the ones who teach us how to talk, how to eat, how to think ... They are similar to us, and they affect us with their ways of thinking, and their habits. Young children don't feel safe only with their parents, because they know that they do their best to protect them, and will do their best to see them achIEve success, they give them advice and very important opinions, they give them the experience they need while facing problems without hiding nothing/ANYTHING, because they want them to solve their problem. They love to see them happy, and will feel sad if they see them unhappy.

OUr parents are considred our first school, they are the ones who help us believe In ourselves, help us have a strong personality, help us know what's wrong and what's right, know our obligations and our rights. Whenever we have problems we seek our parents, and they open their arms and do their best to help us.

To sum up, parents are considred our frIEnds, our doctors, and ARE withOUT ANY doubt our best teachers, they are our closest family, we are part of them, they would even sacrifice their life to see us successful.

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[Englishtestspyder]

thx again Mr Alan