Toefl essay sample: observing and studying animals

[Ellie]

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Agree or disagree with that observing and studying animals helps to understand human nature

Toefl essay sample

I will go with this idea that observing animals help to understand human nature. Some people thinks that animal is a totally different creature with human being and they can not give us good examples how their behavior makes human life better, but I strongly believe to study animals’ world would give many answers as human is also kind of an animal.
First of all, there already exist many examples to help advancing human life by technical ways. As we know, we developed the marine searching skills – using sonar Tec knowledge - after study the bat. Trough the study of spider web, some company could develop the skill which includes the tension proof cloth material. Even I only mentioned about just few factors which really brought the great advantage for human life among the numerous cases, these all results are from the observation of animals in nature.
Secondly, to watch and study animal not only help us by technical ways but also physiology aspects. Many researchers are finding their answer to solve the problem about the symptoms which human are still suffered. As they have a difficulty to research using the human directly, they are trying to figure them out using animals. In another words, we are using the creatures for solving the inside problem of humans.

Without their help, I know this help is not volunteering way from them, how human develop the better medicines to help the people who is suffered by special disease? They are already related with us by so many areas as I mentioned above. All these considering, I think that observing animal give many support to advance the human life.

[Alan]

HI,

I will go ALONG with this idea that observing animals helpS US to understand human nature. Some people think that AN animal is a totally different creature with/FROM A human being and they cannot give us good examples how their behavior makes human life better, but I strongly believe to study animals’ /THE ANIMALworld would give many answers as A human is also A kind of animal.
First of all, there already exist many examples to help human life/ADVANCE IN technical ways. As we know, we developed the marine searching skills – using sonar Tec knowledge - after studyING the bat. THrough the study of A spider'S web, some companIES WERE ABLE TO develop the skill which includes the tension proof cloth material. Even I only mentioned about just A few factors which really brought the great advantage for human life among the numerous cases, all THESE results are from the observation of animals in nature.
Secondly, to watch and study animalS not only helpS us IN technical ways but also IN physiologyICAL aspects. Many researchers are finding their answer to solve the problem about the symptoms which humanS are still sufferING FROM. As they have a difficulty to research using the human directly, they are trying to figure them out using animals. In other words, we are using creatures for solving the inside/INTERNAL problemS of humans.

Without their help, I know this help is not volunteerED BY them, how humanS develop better medicines to help the people who ARE sufferING FROM A special disease? They are already related with us by so many areas as I mentioned above. Considering ALL THIS, I think that observing animalS giveS A LOT OF support to advance human life.

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[englishtestspyder]

Hi ellie,
would you please give me the number of this topic of the toefl essays?
thx in advance

[Ellie]

sorry for my late answer.

I don't have any idea about the number.. I picked this subject from my studying toefl book.

[englishtestspyder]

No problem Ellie, thx anyway ...
I had this topic in my real test, I think that it's the hardest topic ... and i just wanted to know some sample essays ... thank you and good luck