TOEFL® essay sample: childhood is the happiest in person's life

[Dolma]

TOEFL essay sample

Childhood is the happiest in person's life

Children are the gift of the God and it would amount insult to the God if we didn't give them care and love. Because they are considered the seed for future world. That is why the responsible parents considered taking care of child comes top of the list. They are treated with all care and love that is ever known in this world. The life of these fortunate children are worth to be remembered and for them childhood is the happiest period in their life.

There is other section of children whose childhood memories are not very beautiful and colourful as that of the one mentioned above. Most probably parents of these child are deprived by poverty and lack knowledge on the importance of child care. These parents often left their children at the unprotected area and don't get meals timely. They just left them to grow on their own. As a result they become the victim of different deseases before they are grown up.

In conclusion, i feel its depend upon the environment and knowledge of the parents to say either the childhood period is happiest or saddest. And most important of all it depent upon the Karma of child.

[Alan]

Hi,

Children are the gift of God and it would amount TO AN insult to God if we didn't give them care and love because they are considered the seed for THE WORLD OF THE FUTURE. That is why responsible parents CONSIDER taking care of THEIR child AS COMING AT THE top of the list. They are treated with EVERY care and love that is ever known in this world. The LIVES of these fortunate children are worth BEING remembered and for them childhood is the happiest period in their life.

There is ANother GROUP of children whose childhood memories are not very OR AS beautiful and colourful as that of the one mentioned above. Most probably parents of these childREN are deprived by poverty and lack knowledge ABOUT the importance of child care. These parents often LEAVE their children IN AN t unprotected area and don't get meals ON TIME. They just LEAVE them to grow on their own. As a result they become the victim of different dIseases before they are grown up.

In conclusion, I feel IT dependS ON the environment and knowledge of the parents to say either the childhood period is THE happiest or saddest. And most important of all it depenDS ON the Karma of child.


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