Toefl essay sample: What famous place do you want to visit?

[ramiro]

Toefl essay sample

What famous place do you want to visit?

The famous place I would like to visit on my vacations is Yguazu Falls, in the frontier of Brazil, Argentina and Paraguay, to feel the power of water, and to leave away the stress of working too much all the year.

The first reason I would like to visit Yguazu Falls is to see one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. The waterfall itself is phisically located in Argentina, but it is very common to visit the Brazilian side as well.

Secondly, this is the perfect place to enjoy nature. On the Argentinean of the waterfall I can walk right around the falling water, and take a boat tour to the mouth of the waterfall. On the other hand, the Brazilian side offers beautiful panoramic views and displays the full splendor of the waterfall.

Another important reason is to leave away daily stress. I have worked almost all the year without a break, so I think that there is no better place in the world to tay relaxed and ready for a new year.

[Alan]

Hi,

The famous place I would like to visit on my vacations is Yguazu Falls, in the frontier of Brazil, Argentina and Paraguay, to feel the power of water, and to leave away/BEHIND the stress of working too much all the year.

The first reason I would like to visit Yguazu Falls is to see one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. The waterfall itself is phYsically located in Argentina, but it is very common to visit the Brazilian side as well.

Secondly, this is the perfect place to enjoy nature. On the Argentinean SIDE of the waterfall I can walk right around the falling water, and take a boat tour to the mouth of the waterfall. On the other hand, the Brazilian side offers beautiful panoramic views and displays the full splendor of the waterfall.

Another important reason is to leave away/BEHIND daily stress. I have worked almost all the year without a break, so I think that there is no better place in the world to Stay relaxed and ready for a new year.

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