TOEFL® essay sample: What famous place do you want to visit?

[Ramiro]

Toefl essay sample

What famous place do you want to visit?

The famous place I would like to visit on my vacations is Yguazu Falls, in the frontier of Brazil, Argentina and Paraguay, to feel the power of water, and to leave away the stress of working too much all the year.

The first reason I would like to visit Yguazu Falls is to see one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. The waterfall itself is phisically located in Argentina, but it is very common to visit the Brazilian side as well.

Secondly, this is the perfect place to enjoy nature. On the Argentinean of the waterfall I can walk right around the falling water, and take a boat tour to the mouth of the waterfall. On the other hand, the Brazilian side offers beautiful panoramic views and displays the full splendor of the waterfall.

Another important reason is to leave away daily stress. I have worked almost all the year without a break, so I think that there is no better place in the world to tay relaxed and ready for a new year.

[Alan]

Hi,

The famous place I would like to visit on my vacations is Yguazu Falls, in the frontier of Brazil, Argentina and Paraguay, to feel the power of water, and to leave away/BEHIND the stress of working too much all the year.

The first reason I would like to visit Yguazu Falls is to see one of the most beautiful waterfalls in the world. The waterfall itself is phYsically located in Argentina, but it is very common to visit the Brazilian side as well.

Secondly, this is the perfect place to enjoy nature. On the Argentinean SIDE of the waterfall I can walk right around the falling water, and take a boat tour to the mouth of the waterfall. On the other hand, the Brazilian side offers beautiful panoramic views and displays the full splendor of the waterfall.

Another important reason is to leave away/BEHIND daily stress. I have worked almost all the year without a break, so I think that there is no better place in the world to Stay relaxed and ready for a new year.

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[Gafarik]

What famous place would you like to visit?Use details and reasons to support your response.

I have o high opinion of visiting London.London is the capital of the United Kingdom,one of the largest and one of the world's most enjoyable cities.

In the first place,it is no secret that London draws people from all over the world.Some come on business,some come to study, to work or on holiday.London is naturally a very English city and it is very cosmopolitan, containing goods, food and entertainment ,as well as people, from many countries of the world.

In the second place, there are a lot of historical places, royal palaces, beautifull parks.London shows examples of buildings that express all the different areas of its history.For example, Buckingham Palace is the official London residence.

To sum up, I think that I would have a genuine affection after my visiting in London.

[Gafarik]

Please, score it! I am very worried about this task

[Kamol]

Is it for second essay type of the TOEFL?

[Jordania]

[Darkangel12891]

the intergrated writing task seems to be the most difficult one^^, the reading is so academic as if you don't understand its main idea, you won't listen efficiently. do you agree with me?

[Jordania]

[Alok.ajax]

Well -

There are so many good places where I just want to visit. But believe me I want to visit Kazakistan....

[Gafarik]

I agree wiht you! Thanks,that you are think the world about my country.

[Mushtafiz]

I think u should enfranchise the beauty of our country. As far as i know the panoramic beauty of your country is not illustrative.