TOEFL essay: Compulsory learning of two foreign languages at high school

[Ema]

TOEFL essay topic: in one paragraph with no more than 60 words give just one reason to state whether you are for or against "compulsory learning of two foreign languages at high school"

I agree with we should study compulsorily two foreign languages at high school. Learning two or more languages at high school is the way for us to access to our model world. If you live in countries which doesn't use English as the first language, you must learn English and another language because English is an international language,it helps you to communicate with people all over the world. If you luckily live in countries which uses English as the first languages, you are maybe easier in communicating with people all over the world but if you go to other countries and they can't speak English, you will feel very hard. If you can speak other languages such as French or Germany, you can get more advantages than people who just can speak one language. And where you can get the basic lessons of those languages? The answer is in high school. Studying languages is very easy when you are in high school or younger, so that compulsory learning of two languages at high school is very good for you to concentrate on studying languages subject and it helps you a lot in your life later.

PS: can you score for me from 1 to 6, please thank you very much
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[Alan]

Hi,

I agree with we should study TWO FOREIGN LANGUAGES compulsorily at high school. Learning two or more languages at high school is the way for us to access to/REACH our model world. If you live in countries which DON'T use English as the first language, you must learn English and another language because English is an international language.It helps you to communicate with people all over the world. If you luckily/YOU ARE LUCKY ENOUGH TO live in countries which usE English as the first language, you are maybe easier in communicating/YOU CAN MORE EASILY COMMUNICATE with people all over the world but if you go to other countries and they can't speak English, you will feel/FIND IT very hard. If you can speak other languages such as French or GERMAN, you can get more advantages than people who CAN just speak one language. And where you can/CAN YOU get the basic lessons of/FOR those languages? The answer is in high school. Studying languages is very easy when you are in high school or younger, so that compulsory learning of two languages at high school is very good for you to concentrate on studying language subjectS and it helps you a lot in your life later.

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