Sentence: I would very much like to focus on more general theories of Energy...

[alexzive]

Dear All,

I am back with sentence to be corrected. Many thanks in advance for any suggestion/correction:

"I would very much like to focus on more general theories of Energy Policy and Innovation Management with an holistic and horinzontal approach aligned with the philosophy of the Technology & Policy Programm at ESD."

Alex

[ron1970]

Alex

"I would very much like to focus on the more general theories of Energy Policy and Innovation Management with a holistic and horinzontal approach aligned with the philosophy of the Technology & Policy Programme at ESD."

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[Alan]

Hi,

I think you can say more general theories without article. If you choose to add 'the', then I would reshape as:

WHICH HAVE a holistic and horinzontal approach aligned with the philosophy of the Technology & Policy Programme at ESD.

A
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[alexzive]

Yes I do!!

thank you for so many helps!!