TOEFL essay: Compare and contrast the advantages of choosing a stable career...

[Mirka24]

Compare and contrast the advantages of choosing a stable career over an adventurous lifestyle

Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion

The advantages to choose a stable career over an adventurous lifestyle are more reasonable for family lifestyle. Considering life full of adventure suits people without any commitment.

Stable career provide life of same routine. Someone who doesn't like making changes in a life would be satisfied with a regular scheduled job, same old friends, ordinary holidays and respectful family. It probably sounds boring. But someone can see advantages to live life like this.
Of course, I would choose the other option. I would or let me say, I am exploring what is behind the other door. What is going to happen tomorrow without making any plans? It is more exciting and adventurous. There might be risks like, I never find the place where I belong or I won't have time for my family or friends. Anyway, we have only one life and everyone should deserve what they choose is the best.
To find any similarities in these two different lifestyles is more difficult. Right now only one came to my mind. I believe, we are all different and everyone of us can make their choice of happy life. It can be even stable or adventurous one.

I like adventure, getting to know new people, exploring country and learning new things. So, stable career wouldn't bring any advantages to my lifestyle. Another reason is why I am here..

[Alan]

Hi,

The advantages OF CHOOSING a stable career over an adventurous lifestyle are more reasonable/SUITABLE for A family lifestyle. Considering A life full of adventure suits people without any commitment.

A Stable career provideS A life of THE same routine. Someone who doesn't like making changes in a life would be satisfied with a regular scheduled job, same old friends, ordinary holidays and A respectful family. It probably sounds boring. But someone/SOME PEOPLE can see THE advantages to live/OF LIVING A life like this.
Of course, I would choose the other option. I would or let me say, I am exploring what is behind the other door. What is going to happen tomorrow without making any plans? It is more exciting and adventurous. There might be risks like, I WILL never find the place where I belong or I won't have time for my family or friends. Anyway, we have only one life and everyone should deserve what they choose is the best.
To find any similarities in these two different lifestyles is more difficult. Right now only one came/COMES TO MIND . I believe, we are all different and everyone of us can make their choice of A happy life. It can even BE A stable or adventurous one.

I like adventure, getting to know new people, exploring A country and learning new things. So, A stable career wouldn't bring any advantages to my lifestyle. THAT IS Another reason is why I am here..



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[Mirka24]

thank you