This is my diary:

[Borjana]

Hello everybody. I think to improve english , and to writing , let to be participant , in this topic with our dairy. sorry, for my misspelling, but, I `m improve every day. thank you.

[Borjana]

Ok. I try first. Today for me was one normally day. My first girl going in morning in kindergarden, my husband in work, and I with my other girl, stay in home. My girls liked to see, watching Tv, but, every morning, I try to play in basement with my girl, and she liked to make " tea party". and put every doll in table, and any bear, and ask me: You liked to drink tea or cofe, and I reply: I liked cofe, but, and tea is good, where you serve me......... After 11.30, is time for me to seat in compjuter, and to make my new tests, for this page, and after 30 minuts, I make one pause, and try again, where my results are good, I`m feeling good, and try new tests. Today is raining day, and I don`t do outside, yesterday was suny day, I spent three hours outside, and fixed lights for Christmas and put and Santa and one roebuck....... next ....

[Torsten]

Dear Bora, it's great that you are keeping a diary or blog. I understand everything you have written in your first entry and if it's OK for you, I'll post a new version of your text here:

OK, I'll go first. Today was a normal day for me. First, my little daughter went to kindergarten in the morning and my husband went to work while I stayed at home with my second daughter. Both my daughters like watching TV but I try to play with them every morning in the basement. Today my older daughter had a tea party. She put every doll and teddy bear on the table and asked me: 'Would you like tea or coffee?' and I said: 'Anything is fine by me as long as you serve me the drink'. At about 11.30 it was time for me to sit down in front of my computer and take my English tests. After 30 minutes I took a break and then tried again. When my results were good I was feeling great and took even more tests.
Today it is raining and I'm not going outside. Yesterday it was sunny and I spent three hours outside, I fixed the lights for Christmas and put a Santa Claus on the tree....

Looking forward to your next blog entry!
Regards,
Torsten
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[Borjana]

Thank you Torsten, I feeling great where I reading your version, but, I hope and promise next entry ,I shall have small quantity misspelling , really, I writing in my book, but, I have need to correct some words, and , this time in my book , will have two versions, and after you , or any body from forum correct me , is finaly for my book, diary.Thank you again and best wishes , sincerely Bora.

[Borjana]

........ yesterday in my house come Pam, (my friend) with their little girl Lilly. Lilly is 8-month old, and is beautyfull girl, smile and playing with toys and my two girls, my girls liked to much. Time where my friend is here, in my house, is wonderfull time, because my girls playing with little girl , and some time, think, this is one big doll, and trying to keep in her hands, Pam is happy too, like me , . After two hours, where is time for my friend to go , my girls crying, and tell me . : don`t let to go, we liked to staying more .............. but is time , because , baby needed to sleeping, .. I say my girls. ... . continuity ....

[Dark magician]

Hi,Borjana

That sounds very interesting when someone read what (hisher) wrote about (hisher) self in the past.

that make me remember when I studied English courses in secondary school "volcano's story" from diary of somebody.

best wishes

Mba
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[Torsten]

[Borjana]

Thank you again Torsten.I think, you expect helping me ,(helping everybody from this forum) you are and literary man, because, you have give my text really form, and if next time I to prepare my diary complet in English,(because in my laungage ,I writing for long time) where , finaly I to put my name, one special place is for you, maybe you laughing with me, or any body reading this message, but, I really think this. Like that, everybody, remember first teacher , where going in first grade in school,, and for me, this time , you are my first teacher for english, but, in full legal age. I am much obliged to you. With respect Bora.

[Borjana]

Hi my friends! I was some bussy days, and nothing don`t writing in English. Today is thursday, december 07, and I tell you for my city, where I living, because is snow day, and is wonderful, I liked too much snow, maybe , because remembering me My country, and my city , and I feeling good. I think people needed to living with remebering from their country, because every things from my country is good.Dear my friends! I understood , I have mistake, but, I `m here to learning, and thank you. with respect Bora.

[Torsten]

Hi Bora, great to hear from you again. So you seem to enjoy the winter in your city. What about your daughter, does she like snow too? As for remember and remind -- please take a look at these sentences:

I remember my country.
The snow reminds me of my country.

In addition, you might want to browse through this thread: remember vs. remind

Talk to you soon,
Torsten
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[Borjana]

.. my dairy... day by day , or step by step, and I see my self different with my english, but, don`t have to much time. Weekend for me is very busy with my two little daughters, week too, . Now I wantet to writing for snow days, last week, where my two daughters , going outside, and don`t come inside for three hours, playing with snow, and slite an backyard, and jumping , liked to make one snowmen, but, don`t have too much snow, . Where my husband come home , my daughters, don`t waiting for any moments, and telling daddy for wonderfull time outside in snow, .I maked too much pictures, and afternoon , together spent time to watching this photto in compjuter, and everyone feeling good.or exactly all feeling good. Dear my friends, this forum helping me, but some time , I`m confus, because I`m sure for my mistake, but, sorry, I hope to learning , sincerely, this week , I don`t study good, but, my tests waiting for me, really I finish 12 testes elementary, and, maybe , I know, study regularly is good way, but any time, time not working for me, and normaly, stay off, ....... my dairy, exactly, my friends, thank you, sincerely Bora.

[Torsten]

Hi Bora, good to hear from you again. You really seem to be enjoying the winter with your little dauthers and your husband. As for your English, the more you read and listen, the better will be your writing and speaking abilities. One thing you can do to improve your spelling is use a spell checker. If you have a free Gmail account you can create your message online, run it through the spell checker and then post it here on the forum. For example, Gmail will tell you the correct spelling of the word wonderful.

Let me know what you think and keep us posted and up to date.
Torsten
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[Borjana]

...... and my dairy, sorry, but I don`t had too much time, and, now, I hope to writing little store from yesterday, where my little daughter, come home from school. Every one yesterday, from kindergarden class, where actualy my daughter frequent, maked one surprise present for mom or daddy. My little daughter maked one her picture with frame.I liked too much, because I feeling great for my daughter, which, with teacher`s help, but, I don`t forget, where my girl tell me: mom, close your eyes, and don`t open, until I tell.I was curious, and little bit , I open eyes, and she tell me :please,mom, this is surprise for you, wait.Finaly, I was waiting, and my daughter, open present, and she feeling great for what was maked in class. After , she closed again this present, and tell me to save where daddy come from work , and was wonderfull moment, where practis again this ritual my daughter, but now, was and me both with them, and she feeling very happy. ........ continue.... thank you my friends, but, my mistake are prezent, yet... .. but not for long time. because , I`m learning.

[Torsten]

Hi Bora, great to hear that you are having fun with your family. As for your English, please note that the correct simple past form of 'make' is 'made'. Also, the word full is spelled with two 'll' at the end but words such as beautiful, useful, wonderful, etc. are spelled with only one 'l' at the end. What you can do is download and install Firefox 2 on your computer. It's a free browser similar to MS Internet Explorer, only much better. It comes with an integrated spell checker that will help you improve your written English. Try it out and let me know what you think.

Regards,
Torsten
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[Borjana]

....... my dairy......Was one wonderful day, because we today had a Christmas Party.My two little daughters had wear beautiful dresses and feeling very happy. For my daughters wonderful moment was where open presents .My first daughter liked too much Hello Kitty, and Santa Claus was bring one Hello Kitty pillow with crayola inside, and second daughter liked Dora, and Santa was bring and Dora , little Dora speaking in English and Spanish. After four hours, is time to go, but my girls liked to stay again , and tell: please mom and daddy we liked this party, and don`t want to go, but every body to be ready to gone and we can to gone.... . Now my two daughters are tired, bored, and sleeping, and for me is time to learning little bit. ... continued...