Starting sentence for an essay about "curriculum development"

[alexzive]

hello there!

May the following sentence be correct as starting sentence for an essay about
"curriculum development"?

"The statement above conceals interesting connotations far above curriculum development."

Thanks, Alex

[Alan]

Hi,

I see what you want to say but I would express it differently:

Beneath this statement lie some interesting connotations that are way beyond just curriculum development.

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