#2 (permalink) Tue Dec 07, 2004 17:05 pm Feedback? |
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Dear Mike,
Many thanks for your message. As you can see, this part of our forum is headed Feedback and Commments. However, in your short text you repeat the words I and my very often. To me, this sounds more like a sales pitch than a piece of feedback. How about taking the time to browse the threads on our forum so you get an idea of what our community is all about? Maybe, we could swap ideas and work together? We and our is always better than I and my. What do you think?
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Torsten Learning Coach

Joined: 25 Sep 2003 Posts: 14493 Location: EU
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