Help on this clause of concession: Despite her poor memory, the old woman told...

[lyliea]

Hi...please help on an example of clauses of concession below.

* Despite her poor memory, the old woman told interesting stories to the children. (change with even though)

Answer : Even though she had poor memory, the old woman told interesting stories to the children.

can it be changed to

Even though she has poor memory, the old woman told interesting stories to the children?

since I assume that the woman still having a poor memory up to this point.

Please advise, and thanks in advance.

Regards,
~maria

[Alan]

Hi,

I feel there is a conflict between 'has' and 'told'. Accepting that the subject is still living and still has a poor memory, it is not clear why the tense changes to 'told'. By using the past form 'told' we are going back to the time when she 'told' the stories and at that time she 'had' a poor memory. Grammatically it is of little significance that she still has a poor memory. The two verbs 'had' and 'told' are linked and need to be in the same time field.

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