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Title: 'Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling... Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:51 am  Title: 'Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling...
 

Hello,

Could you correct this title , please?

"Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling System"
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Title: 'Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling... Mon Dec 18, 2006 13:33 pm  Title: 'Demonstration for a part of the Passport Administration Scheduling...
 

Hi Sultano

Though it's a bit of a mouthful, why not write:
Passport Administration Scheduling System Demo

That sounds less awkward to me than the longer version of the title. Despite the fact that 'demo' is more informal than 'demonstration', it is frequently used even in business settings.

If you decide you like the longer, more formal version better, then you should use 'of' rather than 'for' -- assuming that the demonstration is a type of presentation of the system, that is.

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