TOEFL® essay sample: When people succeed in life, it is because of hard work

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When people succeed in life, it is because of hard work. Being lucky has nothing to do with success in life? Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to explain?

A successful person attracts the attention of everybody in the world. All people like a successful person. Sometimes successful people become an ideal for others. For success in life, hard work is very important. People can pass any test in life with hard work. That’s why hard work is the key to success. But luck is also important. We cannot deny it. In success of each and every person, luck also plays an important role. Therefore I agree that luck is also important for success. There are many reasons for this. These are as follows:

Some people are very successful in life. That is not only because of hard work but also luck. Successful people have found the opportunities to do all types of activities in which they want to succeed in their life. I have a good example of this in my life. I found a job few days before but I live in US and have no work permit therefore, I lost it. This is because of my luck. I found it after hard work. Hence I want to say only hard work is not important, but luck is also important.

Some people are very good in English but others are not. That is because of their luck. In life if people do not find the chance to study English then they do not achieve command on it. For example most of the friends are very successful because they found an opportunity to study English. But I would like to say with hard work people can improve it. Luck is not in the hands of people but hard work is. Everything is possible in the world by hard work and luck going together.

In world some people are very rich and they are earning millions of dollars. This is not only because of their hard work but luck as well. For example if a person lives in the U.S. then for him it is easy for him to earn millions as compared to those who live in poor nations. By doing hard work people can never be a millionaire this is possible because of luck as well.

Finally I would like to say luck is very important to find an opportunity. Without opportunity people cannot do any thing. But hard work is also important. A person who wants to be a successful man, should work hard.

[Alan]

A successful person attracts the attention of everybody in the world. EVERYBODY likeS a successful person. Sometimes successful people become an ideal for others. For success in life, hard work is very important. People can pass any test in life with hard work. That’s why hard work is the key to success. But luck is also important. We cannot deny it. In THE success of each and every person, luck also plays an important role. Therefore I agree that luck is also important for success. There are many reasons for this. These are as follows:

Some people are very successful in life. That is not only because of hard work but also luck. Successful people have found the opportunities to do all types of activities in which they want to succeed in their life. I have a good example of this in my life. I found a job few days before but I live in THE USA and have no work permit therefore, I lost it. This is because of my luck. I found it after hard work. Hence I want to say only hard work is not important, but luck is also important.

Some people are very good AT English but others are not. That is because of their luck. In life if people do not find the chance to study English then they do not achieve command oF it. For example most of the friends are very successful because they found an opportunity to study English. But I would like to say with hard work people can improve it. Luck is not in the hands of people but hard work is. Everything is possible in the world by hard work and luck going together.

In THIS world some people are very rich and they are earning millions of dollars. This is not only because of their hard work but luck as well. For example if a person lives in the U.S. then for him it is easy for him to earn millions as compared to those who live in poor nations. By doing hard work people can never be a millionaire this is possible because of luck as well.

Finally I would like to say luck is very important to find an opportunity. Without opportunity people cannot do anything. But hard work is also important. A person who wants to be a successful man, should work hard.



Alan
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