TOEFL® essay: Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain...

[Missiontoefl]

Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and explain why you think it has changed people’s lives. Automobile, bicycle and airplanes- use specific reasons and examples.

Vehicles play a very important role in people lives. With the growth of science, desire of humans has increased. Vehicles show a direct impact on people’s lives. Every new invention changed the life of humans. For instance when first bicycle was invented then people adapted their lifestyle to use bicycle. After that science invented automobiles again people adapted their lifestyle to that. After automobiles now science has developed airplanes. Now people are also changing there lifestyle to use airplanes. In my view, the invention of airplanes completely changed the lives of people. There are many reasons behind that. These are as follows:

After the discovery of airplanes people can think to go outside their country for work. I would like to say, people are globalized because of conveniences in travel. It is very convenient to travel in flight. Therefore nobody worries for their travel. Travelling in airplanes is less time consuming and very comfortable. Nowadays people do not have time to spend in journey. In every profession people have very few holidays. All want to save their time. People can think to go outside because of airplanes. In airplanes people can enjoy their journey. Now people do not worry to go for a long voyage.

In my opinion, airplanes have increased the rate of employment and business. Now businessmen can open their businesses anywhere in the world. Airplanes take less time and journey is very comfortable therefore nobody is worried of travelling. I have seen a good example for this. One of my uncle has his business in India, USA, Singapore, UK and Canada. He manages it very well. This is possible because of airplanes. For world wide business, travelling time should be less and travel should be comfortable. Rate of employment also increased because of airplanes. Airplanes need many people (in airport, flight and for maintenances).

Finally I would like to say invention of airplane completely changed the world for leisure, saving time and for a comfortable journey. It increased the rate of employment and the world wide business.

[Alan]

Vehicles play a very important role in people lives. With the growth of science, THE desire of humans has increased. Vehicles show a direct impact on people’s lives. Every new invention HAS changed the life of humans. For instance when THE first bicycle was invented then people adapted their lifestyle to use THE bicycle. After that science invented automobiles again people adapted their lifestyle to that. After automobiles now science has developed airplanes. Now people are also changing there lifestyle to use airplanes. In my view, the invention of airplanes completely changed the lives of people. There are many reasons behind that. These are as follows:

After the discovery of airplanes people can think OF GOING outside their country for work. I would like to say, people are globalized because of conveniences in travel. It is very convenient to travel BY PLANE. Therefore nobody worries ABOUT their travel. Travelling in airplanes IS less time consuming and very comfortable. Nowadays people do not have time to spend ON A journey. In every profession people have very few holidays. THEY All want to save their time. People can think OF GOING outside because of airplanes. In airplanes people can enjoy their journey. Now people do not worry ABOUT GOING ON a long voyage.

In my opinion, airplanes have increased the rate of employment and business. Now businessmen can open their businesses anywhere in the world. Airplanes take less time and THE journey is very comfortable therefore nobody is worried ABOUT travelling. I have seen a good example OF this. One of my uncleS has his businessES in India, USA, Singapore, UK and Canada. He manages THEM very well. This is possible because of airplanes. For world wide business, travelling time should be less and travel should be comfortable. THE Rate of employment HAS also increased because of airplanes. Airplanes need many people (in airport, flight and for maintenance).

Finally I would like to say THE invention of THE airplane completely changed the world for leisure, saving time and for a comfortable journey. It increased the rate of employment and world wide business.



Alan
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