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TOEFLŪ essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork



 
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TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork #1 (permalink) Wed Dec 27, 2006 20:14 pm   TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork
 

Life is full of twist and turns .Everyone has to struggle here in this world to overcome every obstacle inthe way to success.For this hardwork is necessary. Without working hard and just by sitting idle it will be hard for one to get success. Since from childhood and till now i always remember the sentence that my parents used to tell me "TO be better person in life and to get success u hav to work hard, The result of hard work is always fruitful,so u have to work hard". I want to give example from my experience today whatever i am its only becoz of hard work. For a guy from lower class family it is almost impossible to do graduation in enginneering on self payment .It's only becoz of the regular hardwaork i got scholarship to do BTECh.I don't believe in luck since luck is never in my part.

Todays world is a competetive world. Everyone here wants to be famous and want success in his life. Whether he may be successful boxer, sportman, actor or writer his present positin is only due to hard work.Let's take an example people who win gold medal in olyumpic games ,novel prize in differnts fields of knowledge is only because of hard work. luck has nothing to do with it .Just by watching television and siiting idle if u are saying that can bend down success in your knee means u are wrong. Yeah perhaps u got success sometimes becoz of your luck but it is not true always .Saying that i am lucky person success automatically comes ....these are the only word of saying ,reality is different .

There is a well kown proverb "NO pain, NO gain" hardwork never go waste .Although it may be later or sooner success comes to your feet. we can have a look towards the life of great persons in the world like mahatma gaandhi ,napolean ,florence,shakespeare ,gautam buddha,albert einstein,newton they all had struggled hard through uot their life .They had made the right utilize of the every second and finally evryone got success intheir life .the world today knowws them .They all didot not succeed at once in ther life. They had worked hard for many years and ultimately they got succeed in their life and it proves that success that comes from hardwork is friutful in comparision to the success that comes from luck .luck is just an accidental it may or may not be in your side .But the success is sure if u choose the path of hardwork.

Hardwork has other advantages too ...... hard work makes person determined .It will always makes you cautious and energetic .so definitely the result u get from hardwork will realise u that whatever path you had chosen earlier was the right one. Present market is the competitive market,whoever has got best potential,knowledge will get the best job. But it may happen that sometimes person having lesser qualities than you can be selected from the same post instead of u. inspite of this i can believe that where there is hardwork, there is success.Luck does have a role in the course of success but the leading role in the path of success is played by the hardwork that is hardwork is key to success in life.
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TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork #2 (permalink) Thu Dec 28, 2006 20:19 pm   TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork
 

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Life is full of twistS and turns .Everyone has to struggle here in this world to overcome every obstacle in the way to success.For this hard work is necessary. Without working hard and just by sitting idle it will be hard for one to get success. Since from childhood and till now I always remember the sentence that my parents used to tell me "TO be A better person in life and to get success YOU havE to work hard, The result of hard work is always fruitful,so YOU have to work hard". I want to give exampleS from my experience today whatever I am its only becAUSE of hard work. For a guy from A lower class family it is almost impossible to GRADUATE in enginneering BY FINANCING YOURSELF. It's only becAUSE of the regular hard work I got A scholarship to do BTECh.I don't believe in luck since luck is never my LOT.

Today's world is a competItive world. Everyone here wants to be famous and wantS success in his life. Whether he may be A successful boxer, sportman, actor or writer his present positiOn is only due to hard work.Let's take an example FROM people who win gold medalS in THE OLYMPIC Games ,novel??? prize in differENT fields of knowledge is only because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with it .Just by watching television and siTTing idle if YOU are saying that can bend down success in your knee means YOU are wrong. YeS perhaps YOU HAVE got success sometimes becAUSE of your luck but it is not true always .Saying that I am A lucky person success automatically comes ....these are the only wordS of saying ,reality is different .

There is a well kNown proverb "NO pain, NO gain" hard work never goES wasteD .Although it may be later or sooner success comes to YOUR feet. we can have a look towards the life of great PEOPLE in the world like Mahatma GHandhi ,NapoleOn ,Florence ??,Shakespeare ,gautam buddha,Albert Einstein,Newton they all had struggled hard throughOUT their life .They had made the right USE of every second and finally evryone got success in their life .The world today knows them .They all did not succeed at once in ther life. They had worked hard for many years and ultimately they got succeSS in their life and it proves that success that comes from hardwork is frUItful in comparision to the success that comes from luck .Luck is just accidental it may or may not be On your side .But success is sure if YOU choose the path of hard work.

Hard work has other advantages too ...... hard work makes A person determined .It will always make you cautious and energetic .So definitely the result YOU get from hard work will MAKE YOU realise that whatever path you had chosen earlier was the right one. THE Present market is the competitive market,whoever has got THE best potential,knowledge will get the best job. But it may happen that sometimes A person having lesser qualities than you can be selected from the same post instead of YOU. Inspite of this I can believe that where there is hard work, there is success.Luck does have a role in the course of success but the leading role in the path of success is played by hard work that is hardwork is THE key to success in life.

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TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork #3 (permalink) Thu Dec 28, 2006 21:57 pm   TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork
 

Hi Alan
Thanks alot for your efforts.
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TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork #4 (permalink) Fri Dec 29, 2006 21:01 pm   TOEFL essay sample: When people succeed it is only because of hardwork
 

thank you very much
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