Errors: management are very highly important in an industrial society...

[Rosalisa]

Hi Teachers,

1. Effective relations between labor and management are very highly important in an industrial society. (Is it right to use 'very' together with 'highly'?

2. In the nineteenth century, Red Cloud rose to leader among the Sioux through his bravery in battle and wisdom in council. (Can i change it to "rose to leadership?)

3. Adobe bricks are made by wetting clay, mixing it with straw or hay, and packing into wooden frames. (There are four underlined choices. I think we should add 'it' after packing'. Is that right?

Thank you.
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[stew.t.]

Hi Rosalisa

Better to use extremely in 1.".................management are extremely important....."

Sounds better to say 2"......... rose to leadership of the Sioux..." but personally would stick with leader.

and "it" would be better in 3.
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[Jamie (K)]

[Rosalisa]

Thank you very much indeed, Stew and Jamie, for clearing out my doubts.
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