Please help me check my letter (IELTS writing task 1)

[dragontv]

Hi all, I wrote this letter that is an ielts writing task 1. So please help me check it. Thank you all guys so much!

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is ABC, your customer, who supposed to take the train that was delayed this morning at 7.am. So I write this letter just to let you know about my situation, and I wonder that you can help me deal with my problem.

This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview. It is very important to me, so I decided to take earliest train this morning to get this appointment’s place on time. But unfortunately, the train I have taken was delayed. So I can’t afford to get there on time. That is why I need your help to deal with my situation. And the thing I would like to be helped is your confirmed letter that strongly submits my troubles. It is very helpful to me to get the company’s understanding of that situation. Please send me your feedback as soon as possible. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
ABC.
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If there were no problems, there would be no opportunities.

[stew.t.]

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is ABC, a client of yours, who was supposed to take the train that was delayed this morning at 7.am. So I am writing to let you know about a situation, and I wonder if you could help me deal with a problem.

This morning, I had an appointment with a company for a job interview. It was very important to me, so I decided to take the earliest train this morning to get to the place on time. But unfortunately, the train I took was delayed. So I could not get there on time. That is why I need your help to deal with the situation. And the thing I would like to be helped with is a confirmation letter that strongly states the situation and problem.
It would be very helpful to me, so I can come to an understanding with the company regarding this situation.
Please send me your feedback as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
ABC.[/quote]
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Please meet Stewart Tunncilff

[dragontv]

Hi stew.t.
Thank you so much for helping me. I've learned something from your post, it's great.
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If there were no problems, there would be no opportunities.

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[Englishuser]

Hi dragontv,

I take it that you are going to take the General Training modules in Reading and Writing. Do you need an IELTS Score for immigration purposes?

All the best,

EU

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