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#2 (permalink) Sat Jan 13, 2007 22:34 pm past, present, or mixed tense |
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I'd omit "home" here.
The patient was discharged.
Or if you must show that the patient went home, try this (IMO it sounds better):
Upon discharge (OR "Upon being discharged"), the patient went home.
or if he was taken to his home by someone else:
Upon discharge (being discharged), the patient was taken to his home. _________________ Billie Jean is not my lover. Hee. |
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#3 (permalink) Sun Jan 14, 2007 0:45 am past, present, or mixed tense |
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Your question seems to be in the title of the thread, but I'm still not sure what your question actually is. So, I'll just add that your original sentence was written in the simple past tense (passive voice).
I agree with Prezbucky -- you should either omit the word home or write that part differently. _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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#4 (permalink) Sun Jan 14, 2007 10:03 am past, present or mixed tense |
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Perhaps:
The patient was discharged and sent home.
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#5 (permalink) Sun Jan 14, 2007 10:39 am past, present or mixed tense |
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Or: The patient was discharged heading for home.
Is it correct? |
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#6 (permalink) Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:47 am past, present or mixed tense |
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Hi Sultano
That sentence indicates that the patient had already begun to travel home before he/she was discharged.
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