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Fri Jan 19, 2007 13:08 pm ‘The mapping of a initiation of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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Hi Tamara,
1.A quick look at your sentence makes me think that your verbs refer to ' (Activities )of an Integral Activity Group ' 2. I think perform is used to emphasize the idea of plurality. |
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Pamela I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Fri Jan 19, 2007 13:12 pm ‘The mapping of a initiation of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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Hi,
The very use of the relative 'that' shows its relationship with the preceding noun 'Group'.
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Alan Co-founder

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Fri Jan 19, 2007 13:16 pm ‘The mapping of a initiation of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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Tamara I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Fri Jan 19, 2007 13:18 pm ‘The mapping of a initiation of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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That isn't a complete sentence, Tamara. Is it some kind of definition or lengthy title?
To me, perform and relate both seem to refer to "Activities".
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Yankee I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Fri Jan 19, 2007 13:33 pm ‘The mapping of an initiation of activities of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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Maybe but you can't have 'that' referring back to a noun other than the one coming immediately before, I respectfully submit.
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Alan Co-founder

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Tamara I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Fri Jan 19, 2007 14:13 pm ‘The mapping of an initiation of activities of a group that perform… and return…’ |
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Hi Alan
I didn't say I liked Tamara's latest techie "sentence". I simply gave my opinion about what I thought the author was trying to refer to.
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| citation vs quotations | Phrase: "at this rate" |