Check The Poem please

[Volcano1985]

Love, freedom dream not enough
Only the freedom still not enough
The Life….
And finally when going from there
Wish you have
A little, most meaningful and lowly smile
Even more worth than everything
Of course its not possible but,
Wish everything becomes how your hearts want…

[Haihao]

Hi,

I kind of came into liking this poem on reading it. But may I ask of you all a few questions?

1. How do you think about 'finally when going from there'? Does it refer to 'The Life' so as to suggest 'when finally the life comes to the end'?

2. What did you mean by 'Check The Poem please', Mr/Ms Volcano? If that's for typo, there could be one in 'Of course its not possible but,'

But I really love it, especially 'A little, most meaningful and lowly smile'.

Haihao