TOEFL essay samples: Parents are the best teachers

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Topic:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Children go to schools to gain more knowledge and to improve their grades. Teachers tend to help students learn. The objectif is typically a course of study, lesson plan, or a particular skill. But are the parents become teacher, the best teachers?

In my opinion, I think the children who have good parents become clever and apt. what are the reasons that make parents the best teachers?

First and foremost, the children benefit a lot from the tender-hearted relationship between them and their parents. This tenderness often misses in classroom. Children need a lot of TLC to well communicate.

Second, despite the role played by teacher, the children need more and more advice and guidence in their matters. Parent must work with their children on homework in order to complete their knowledge and give them more skills.

The third reasons, the children intentionally take behaviour from their parents. So, the parents who make a better life and well organize make a good influence on their children. Therefore, the children behave well and acquire the ability to become an academic child.

All in a word, the effect parents take on the child’s education process is greater than any teachers in school, they are the best teacher.

[Alan]

Children go to schools to gain more knowledge and to improve their grades. Teachers tend to help students learn. The objectiVE is typically a course of study, lesson plan, or a particular skill. But CAN the parents become teacher, the best teachers?

In my opinion, I think the children who have good parents become clever and SKILLED. what are the reasons that make parents the best teachers?

First and foremost, the children benefit a lot from the tender-hearted relationship between them and their parents. This tenderness IS often MISSING in A classroom. Children need a lot of TLC to communicate WELL.

SecondLY, despite the role played by THE teacher, the children need more and more advice and guidAnce in their SUBJECTS. ParentS must work with their children on homework in order to complete their knowledge and give them more skills.

The third reason, the children intentionally take behaviour from their parents. So, the parents who make a better life and ARE well organizeD HAVE a good influence on their children. Therefore, the children behave well and acquire the ability to become an academic child.

In a word, the effect parents HAVE on the child’s education process is greater than any teachers in school, they are the best teacherS.

Alan
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