TOEFL® essay samples: The Impacts of Global Warming On World Life

[Vuralorion]

Hello, i plan to take TOEFL exam on next june. This is my first experiment for writing essays. I know, it is not so good and short a bit, nevertheless i am waiting for your comments and criticism. thanks

The global warming is the one of the most important debates in 21th century. Simply, global warming refers that the consequences of the distortion on world atmosphere which are emerged through the heavy and dirty industrilization all over the world.

Eventhough global warming damages the world by weakenning the atmosphere, it is an inevitable result of industries and indirectly technology. Industries are vital for human beings in a way that produces necessary goods and services to survive. As people demand these goods and services and population grows, industries develop and increase their production capacity to meet the requirements of this rising population. From this point of view, industry and technology are the necessities for human beings. People need them to sruvive.

On the other hand, as industries expand, they require more land and resources to run production. Since they wipe out the trees to gain more clear land to set new factories and use more resources, the environment becomes unable to recover itself dramatically. As a result, world becomes an unconvenient place for humans and other creatures to live.

Therefore, people should make a choice between living in a healthy world with limited welfare and living in a destroyed world with high welfare and opportunities. In addition, people may tend to develop technologies which protect world against harming industrial effects.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a university student and an adviser in the university's work-study program

[Alan]

Global warming is the one of the most important debates in 21th century. Simply, global warming refers TO the consequences of the distortion on world atmosphere which emerge through the heavy and dirty industriAlization all over the world.

Eventhough global warming damages the world by weakening the atmosphere, it is an inevitable result of industries and indirectly technology. Industries are vital for human beings in a way that produces necessary goods and services to survive. As people demand these goods and services and THE population grows, industries develop and increase their production capacity to meet the requirements of this rising population. From this point of view, industry and technology are the necessities for human beings. People need them to sURvive.

On the other hand, as industries expand, they require more land and resources to run production. Since they wipe out the trees to gain more clear land to ESTABLISH new factories and use more resources, the environment becomes unable to recover itself dramatically. As a result, THE world becomes an unconvenient place for humans and other creatures to live.

Therefore, people should make a choice between living in a healthy world with limited welfare and living in a destroyed world with high welfare and opportunities. In addition, people may tend to develop technologies which protect THE world against harmFUL industrial effects.

Alan
_________________
English as a Second Language
You can read my ESL story Present Simple

[Vuralorion]

thanks for amendments. so how do you score this essay; low? moderate? high?

[Jakelewis]

Global Warming and the greenhouse effect are words that have been discussed in great detail constantly for the past twenty years. They have generated many debates and forums by people trying to get a handle on what exactly they are and what it is that they mean to the general public. “Some of the primary sources of pollution include automobiles, municipal waste (garbage and sewage), agriculture pesticides, and industrial processes” (Barbour 48). If what scientists are saying about global warming and the greenhouse effect are true, is that all there is? The three main reasons people don’t understand global warming are just not understanding the definitions of global warming and the greenhouse affect, how global warming affects them, and the cover up the government uses to convince them.

- As the World Health Organization states that there are more than 500 million cases of malaria each year, malaria can not be caused only by warming of the climate, the increasing of the temperature can increase the incidents of malaria only by 10-16%.
- The ACSH studies were also stating that wealth can bring health and stimulate long living, whereas poverty is one of the reasons for hard diseases and short life spans. And public health would be put at risk when great economic costs could go on control of greenhouse gas emissions, as it could lead to poverty.
- Yellow fever, malaria and other tropical diseases could be prevented with fewer costs than those needed to restrict greenhouse gas emissions, for example: use of vaccinations, judicious use of pesticides and biological control methods, usage of mosquito and fly screens and public education.
- Spending money for reducing greenhouse gas emissions means that this money can not be used for better methods of preventing the above mentioned diseases, as better nutrition and sanitation.
This was one of the bright examples how the problem of global warming is not treated in a proper way in order to solve the financial and other problems of the high politic leaders, who care really not much for the future of the whole planet.

Email me for any help or you can try mailing support@uktermpaper.com as these guys also helped me with my dissertation.
http://www.courseworkwriter.com/