TOEFL essay samples: Never give up

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Never, never give up. means to keep trying and never stop workingfor your goals. do you agree or disagree with that statment?

" try again never stop believing " here's a saying that i agree 100% with it.
dreaming is the sweetest thing ever, because we always dream about things we love and hope .
The best way to reach your dreams and hopes is to work to achieve them and to change them to reality.
Here are some great advices that can help to achive dreams:
First of all, you need to set your goals and ambitions and then try to reach them step by step.
After that, do every littel thing that you possibly can to achive them .
If you fall down just try again and again and always remember that there's no raising with falling a thousand times.
Therefor, be decisive about reaching your ambitions and try hard to do that.
But on the other hand, life without taking chances is no kind a life at all.
For instance imagine yourself living without a point to reach or even a dream to make true , impossiable !
Life is sweet when you know how to run it and it's ever sweeter when you work hard and when you reach your goals and dreams.
Further more, all you have to do is just stand up for something even if you may fall , take that road where ever it may go.
In conclusion, I agree for sure that working hard for your dreams is the best way to achive them .
And finally i only have one sentence to write : never, ever lose your passion to dream.

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