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Where is your sentence, lakshminath? If you post one, we will advise you on improvements.
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| #3 (permalink) Mon May 07, 2007 10:00 am Sentence formation |
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As per discussion through telecon, You have discuss with your managment . Once you had decided and please update the status. We will be waiting for your reply.
Can you please look the above sentence Micawber. Please suggest me |
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| #4 (permalink) Mon May 07, 2007 10:43 am Sentence formation |
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Here are my suggestions, lakshminath:
As per our telephone conversation, I understand that you must discuss ['discuss' needs an object here: 'the problem'? 'our request'? etc]with your management. Once you have decided, please update the status ['status' needs further information here: 'of our application'? 'of your membership'? etc]. We will be waiting for your reply.
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| #5 (permalink) Mon May 07, 2007 15:39 pm Sentence formation |
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| thanks for your updates. I want to improve more conversation with you and i want send few more letter to you and you can help me on this crictical conditions . I am waiting for your reply. |
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| #6 (permalink) Mon May 07, 2007 22:50 pm Sentence formation |
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I am waiting for your sentences.
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| #7 (permalink) Tue May 08, 2007 6:51 am Sentence formation |
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| There was problem with our ISP at US office due to which there were interruptions on connecting to XXX and XXX websites. We have currently switched over to another ISP and both Flo and Scribe web services should be up. Please let us know if you continue to face any issue. We will continue to monitor the situation and will keep you updated. |
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| #8 (permalink) Tue May 08, 2007 23:34 pm Sentence formation |
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Very good. Some suggestions:
There has been a problem with our ISP at the US office causing interruptions in connecting to XXX and XXX websites. We have currently switched over to another ISP, and both Flo and Scribe web services should be up. Please let us know if you continue to face any difficulties. We will continue to monitor the situation and will keep you updated.
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| #9 (permalink) Wed May 09, 2007 11:35 am Sentence formation |
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Thanks for your update Micawber
you can suggest me and how i can improve more on the letter writing and you can provide some websites where i can improve on it. |
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| #10 (permalink) Wed May 09, 2007 12:14 pm Sentence formation |
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Nothing works better than reading examples. Try HERE and HERE.
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| #11 (permalink) Thu May 10, 2007 13:42 pm Sentence formation |
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| Thanks for sending links :) |
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