Another example of business mail - repling to an interview propose

[Velectro]

Hello,

in my studing business english example letter, I'd like to have a discussion about an hypothetical interview invitation. For example if I recive an interview invitation for Fryday 11th of may, I reply in this way:

[Mister Micawber]

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Hello,

In my study of a business English example letter, I'd like to discuss a hypothetical interview invitation. For example, if I receive an interview invitation for Friday the 11th of May, I reply in this way:

[Velectro]

Thank Mister Micawber,

Sometimes it is discouraging to see how many error are made.
Anyhow, as required from the example mail, you must propose suitable hour (from 5:00 pm example), saying that you have a previous meeting in Milano.
What do you think about something similar?

N.B. she is a woman, probably a segretary

[Mister Micawber]

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The way your original letter read, I thought it was the employer who proposed the hour; I therefore used 'will' to express your absolute consent.

[Velectro]

Yes, I understand.

Thank you

[Mister Micawber]

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I missed the last 'from', velectro, and have just fixed it.
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Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's

[Velectro]

I have noticed.

Thank you