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Model answer needed! #1 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 9:31 am   Model answer needed!
 

What will you do if your visa is denied?

How will you go about replying this question from the embassy?? What is the model answer for this?? Anyone?? :?
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Model answer needed! #2 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 10:00 am   Model answer needed!
 

The embassy probably wants you to give a personal answer, not one that has been suggested to you. Besides, there shouldn't be a model answer, but one that reflects your own honest opinion.

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Model answer needed! #3 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 10:51 am   Model answer needed!
 

My reply:

~ If my visa is denied, i want to know the reasons for denying my visa. I will reapply and reapply repeatedly until it is approved finally. I strongly believed that with my strong determination to study to achieve my goals, nothing is impossible for me.

** Can someone correct my lousy english as my brain is not functioning well today** :oops:
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Model answer needed! #4 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 12:05 pm   Model answer needed!
 

Hi NS,

Quote:
What will you do if your visa is denied?

How will you go about replying this question from the embassy??


Which embassy is asking you such a question?

Quote:
If my visa is denied, i want to know the reasons for denying my visa. I will reapply and reapply repeatedly until it is approved finally.


Knowing what country's embassy we are talking about (and what kind of visa you are applying for) might help, but in my humble opinion your suggested answer seems rather arrogant. Normally, your chances of getting a visa are the same no matter how you answer this kind of questions, though. What really matters is if you meet the legal requirements for the type of visa you are applying for.

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Model answer needed! #5 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 12:15 pm   Model answer needed!
 

NS wrote:
My reply:

~ If my visa is denied, i want to know the reasons for denying my visa. I will reapply and reapply repeatedly until it is approved finally. I strongly believed that with my strong determination to study to achieve my goals, nothing is impossible for me.

** Can someone correct my lousy english as my brain is not functioning well today** :oops:

I wouldn't put "believe" in the past :)
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Model answer needed! #6 (permalink) Wed May 16, 2007 21:02 pm   Model answer needed!
 

good suggestion, lost_soul
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Model answer needed! #7 (permalink) Thu May 17, 2007 17:06 pm   Model answer needed!
 

Or maybe this:

"Ok, so when can i reapply for the visa again?" :roll:
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