Use of submit

[velectro]

Hi,

A recruit sent me a job spec and wanted to know if I would be interested. I'd like to say that I'm interested ad subject they sent but I don't know if I well used the verb submitted. Please keep an eye on my reply mail:

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Dear ***,

Thank you for the interest in my skills.

I’m really interested in the position of Sales Engineer you submitted.

Please find enclosed my word adjourned CV and Cover Letter.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Best regards,
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[Jamie (K)]

Dear ***:

Thank you for your interest in my skills.

I’m really interested in the position of Sales Engineer that you have offered.

Please find enclosed my word adjourned [I can't understand "word adjourned"] CV and cover letter.

I look forward to hearing from you,

Best regards,

[Englishuser]

Hi Jamie,

What is wrong with a comma in:

[Haihao]

A little bird told me ':' is better than ',' for a business letter.

[velectro]

Why after Dear you have used ":"?
Why you underlined C and L of cover letter?

"word adjourned" means only "an adjourned CV in Microsoft Word format file"

Can you suggest some training aid about business writing?
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[lost_soul]

As you have requested

[Conchita]

[Jamie (K)]

[velectro]

In italian "aggiornare = adjourn" have two meaning, one refering to meeting,

"aggiornare una riunione o una seduta"

the second refering to documents,file or DB

"aggiornare un CV/ aggiornare un database".

Probably in english the second meaning is not used so I might have said:

"word adjourned" = an updated CV in Microsoft Word format file

Are you agree?
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[Jamie (K)]

Oh, I see! "Aggiornare" means the same thing as French "mettre ? jour", meaning to update. In that case, you should have said "an up-to-date CV in Word format", but "up-to-date" is not necessary, because any employer assumes that any CV should be up to date. So it's better to say "a current CV in Word format."

I thought that by "adjourned" you meant "adjoined", which means "attached". You attach a computer file to an e-mail.

[lost_soul]

[velectro]

Is right! I know, but I wrong everytime, for the same reason in italian we say: "Sei daccordo?".
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[Conchita]

[Jamie (K)]

And to ask, "Are we agreed?" while not wrong, is a little unusual.

[Englishuser]

Hi,