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Expressions "broken upon"



 
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Expressions "broken upon" #1 (permalink) Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:21 am   Expressions "broken upon"
 

Hi,

Could you please help me out with the passage below?

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They seemed to be musing as one upon something remote, inscrutable. They were like a single octopus. They were like the roots of a huge tree uncovered, the earth broken momentarily upon the writhen, thick, fetid tangle of its lightless and outraged life.


I wonder if I could reword the underlined part to:

They were like the roots of a huge tree, as which (the roots) were unrooted the earth, which had been on the written, thick, fetid tangle of its lightless and outraged life, was broken up instantly.

Thank you!

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Expressions "broken upon" #2 (permalink) Mon Jul 09, 2007 14:24 pm   Expressions "broken upon"
 

I'm not sure what you mean, HH. My effort:

They were like uncovered tree roots (tree roots with no soil over them); as if the earth had been temporarily removed, revealing a thick, writhing, smelly tangle of dark, violated/desecrated life.

I am guessing that he is speaking of a pile of dead bodies?
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Expressions "broken upon" #3 (permalink) Tue Jul 10, 2007 0:14 am   Expressions "broken upon"
 

Thank you so much, MM, and now it is made as clear as a bell to me.

The author was describing a group of very poor people with awful smell. The context is as follows:

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The smell of them, of their bodies, seemed to ebb and flux in the still hot air. They seemed to be musing as one upon something remote, inscrutable. They were like a single octopus. They were like the roots of a huge tree uncovered, the earth broken momentarily upon the writhen, thick, fetid tangle of its lightless and outraged life. "Come," Basket said. "You know our errand. Is he whom we seek gone?"


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Expressions "broken upon" #4 (permalink) Tue Jul 10, 2007 3:00 am   Expressions "broken upon"
 

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Well, I was close. If the homeless here are any indication, they probably smelled dead.
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