TOEFL essay writting: Why people attend to college

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Hi,

Nowadays, more an more people have acces to higher education. There are several reasons to explain this fact, like have a better job or a higher salar, learn thing that we couldn't learn in high school, and live a new experience which can be a kind of local more. Firstly, college or university offers better qualifications than offers high school. So th studebt can climb social ladder and then have a better situation in the society. Of course, a good career gives always a good salary, and certain people may be attracted to the money given from their job. A succesful llife is often guided by a college or university diploma. Secondly, college guves the opportunity to learn what we couldn't learn before because high school's course list may not comes up of student expectations. In this way, when you do what you like to do, your motivation raise up an do you grades. You can discover new passions or centers of interests and this is beneficial in all points. Thirdly, a certain numbers of years builds the personality up. The student has a new environment, far away from his parents and his cumfortable home. He must learn how to organize his schedule and manage on his own. What is more, student is at an age when he has to grow up and get loose from his childhood. College is the first step to his life, when he is breaking free, but still under surveillance. Finally, There are many reason so that a student goes to college, and everyone has his own one. Whether they are attracred by the career prospectives, money, new skills or experience, most of student choose to study to college and this is the best way to success.

[Alan]

Hi,

Nowadays, more anD more people have accesS to higher education. There are several reasons to explain this fact, like TO have a better job or a higher salarY, learn thing that we couldn't learn in high school, and live a new experience which can be a kind of local more???.

Firstly, college or university offers better qualifications than ARE offerED IN high school. So th studeNt can climb THE social ladder and then have a better situation in society. Of course, a good career ALWAYS gives a good salary, and certain people may be attracted to the money PROVIDED BY their job. A succesful life is often guided by a college or university diploma.

Secondly, college guves the opportunity to learn what we couldn't learn before because A high school course list may not come up TO student expectations. In this way, when you do what you like to do, your motivation rISES up aS do you grades. You can discover new passions or centers of interests and this is beneficial in all points.

Thirdly, certain numbers of years builds the personality up. The student has a new environment, far away from his parents and his cOmfortable home. He must learn how to organize his schedule and manage on his own. What is more, A student is at an age when he has to grow up and get AWAY from his childhood. College is the first step to his life, when he is breaking free, but still under surveillance.

Finally, There are many reasonS that a student goes to college, and everyone has his own one. Whether they are attracred by the career prospects, money, new skills or experience, most studentS choose to study AT college and this is the best way to success.

Alan
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