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#2 (permalink) Tue Aug 07, 2007 19:32 pm Rating a request |
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| To me, the sentence by itself, without context, makes little sense. After reading it, I have trouble understanding what's it about without guessing. |
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Diverhank I'm here quite often ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:15 pm Rating a request |
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There're users and IT people. A user asks an IT man to do some changes in a program. After the IT man made the requested changes the user should open a helpdesk database and mark a checkbox. There're 5 checkboxes. - very good - good - normal - unsatisfied - very unsatisfied
This is the rating.
It's OK now? |
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Attila I'm here quite often ;-)
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#4 (permalink) Thu Aug 09, 2007 12:51 pm Rating a request |
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Hi Attila
How about this sentence:
The user should rate the quality of the work after requested changes have been made. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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Yankee I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#5 (permalink) Thu Aug 09, 2007 18:52 pm Rating a request |
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Yankee's suggestion is really good. You can also avoid the word rate and say something like:
Please fill out a customer satisfaction survey after... or you can go all out and...
"In our continuing effort to improve the quality of service to our customers, we would appreciate your completing a short survey and provide any comments you may have on our services and how to improve them." |
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Diverhank I'm here quite often ;-)

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#6 (permalink) Fri Aug 10, 2007 11:29 am Rating a request |
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Thanks for the answers.
I must admit, however, that you didn't help me to improve my self-confidence related my English knowledge if you say that you don't have the slightest idea what I could mean with the below sentence. :(
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| When the changes the user asked for are done, the applicant should rate the solution of the request. |
Is that really so awfully composed? :o |
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Attila I'm here quite often ;-)
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#7 (permalink) Fri Aug 10, 2007 12:21 pm Rating a request |
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Hi Attila
No, it's not an awful sentence, but the second half was confusing to me. I guess my main problems were that I didn't understand why you had used the word 'applicant', and 'solution of the request' is an odd turn of phrase to me. . _________________ "Nearly all men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a man's character, give him power." ~ Abraham Lincoln |
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Yankee I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#8 (permalink) Fri Aug 10, 2007 15:41 pm Rating a request |
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| The sentence in itself is good with the exception that when you use "user" and then "applicant" to mean the same thing...Without any other info, the readers must assume "user" and "applicant" are different entities and that made it confusing to me. |
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Diverhank I'm here quite often ;-)

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