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meaning of lying down | very much / greatly
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another business mail #1 (permalink) Wed Aug 08, 2007 18:51 pm   another business mail
 

Hi,

I need a correction of this mail, especially about the tense:

Quote:
Dear yyyyyy,

As I told you by phone all documentation has been sent.

Concerning the fair in Milan my chartered accoutant said that the best way to refund is including all in a bonus (like relocation one) after my starting date 1st of October.

I’m coming back in Bologna on Saturday, 25th August so I would be deligthed to meet you in Verona the following week.

Looking forward to meet you.

Regards

xxxxxxx



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another business mail #2 (permalink) Thu Aug 09, 2007 8:46 am   another business mail
 

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Dear yyyyyy,

As I told you by phone, all documentation has been sent.

Concerning the fair in Milan, my chartered accountant said that the best way to refund is to include all in a bonus (like a relocation bonus) after my starting date of October 1st.

I’m coming back to Bologna on Saturday, August 25th, so I would be delighted to meet you in Verona the following week.

I am looking forward to meeting you.

Regards,
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