TOEFL® essay samples: Why is music important to many people?

[Casonlo]

TOEFL essay: People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people?

There are certain people who claim that music is necessary in their daily lives – in other words, they practically cannot go a day without music. This idea may overstate the importance of music; in most cases, however, music virtually is a crucial element in our lives at different times.

Although there are a multitude of recreational activities for us to choose, music is still the top priority for most people. The reason is that when listening to music, we can isolate ourselves from our busy lives. Moreover, music can refresh our mind. Take myself as an example, after a day’ toil, listening to music is a blessing for me because it is so joyful in the music world.

In addition, music can impact the emotions, be it pleasure or misery. For example, pop music is obviously necessary to a party as it could enhance the atmosphere of the party. On the other hand, it could a spiritual healing to listen to same melodious music because it probably would reduce our laments and could render an encouraging effect.

Furthermore, music can reflect the culture and history of a country. Take “Fato” as an example. “Fato”, which depicts the history of an era of the discovery of ocean, is such a famous and appealing piece in Portugal. Nowadays, this conventional music is mixed with the modern music and, it becomes one of the most popular music in the world.

It is doubtless that music is of great importance in every aspect of our lives, whether it is the private lives or the culture and history of a nation. Though nowadays there are a variety of leisure for our choices, to a certain extent, I believe that music still is prevail option because it is so enjoyable in the “music world”.

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“Music soothes the mind and gives relax to the soul.” Many peoples agree with this quote. In fact lots of people choose music as their most favourite activity, wheter it is limited to be a listener, or even a player. Nowadays, music becomes one of the core values in many peoples live.

There are many reasons why music is often considers as an important thing. One of it is because music is like a “universal language”. For example, to enjoy a song, you don’t have to understand the language in which it sang. The melody of that song will “speak” for it self in a very simple, yet understandable way. In fact for some music, such as an instrumental music, words are no needed at all.

Music can also help to give a comfortable feeling and bring you to a good mood. You can listen to any kind of music depends on your mood. When you need to soothe and relax in the night, then you can hear to a slow music. Opposite to that, you may prefer to listen to an upbeat music whenever you need to get a high spirit.

Not to forget, for some peoples music is a way to live. For singers, composers, or musicians, music is definitely important as they earn their money from that field. Even thought it is actually a job, but many peoples find that doing music is so much fun unlike any other job. That is probably one reason why nowadays many people would consider music as their job. Peoples’ enthusiashm in a singing contest, such as American Idol, is one great example to show it.

For all those reasons, music definitely becomes one of the important things in our life. Even for me myself, I don’t think I can live without it. A world without music will be a boring world.